A variety of half-baked adventures from the mind of a hypnosis obsessed mare
It's alright, though there's not much to it beyond X hypnotizes Y. Kind of like the implication that her family became wealthy due to mind control.
I really liked it. Would love to see more, you write MC really well!
I liked the pacing and the nice smooth turning of Applebloom into her slave. I'd love to see more!
It's alright, though there's not much to it beyond X hypnotizes Y. Kind of like the implication that her family became wealthy due to mind control.
I really liked it.
Would love to see more, you write MC really well!
I liked the pacing and the nice smooth turning of Applebloom into her slave. I'd love to see more!