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Another 'Displaced' fic, this one regarding Card Captor Sakura.
Amazing, since I happen to be writing one where I get turned into the Mirror Card by the evil merchant who hates me.
Look forward to seeing more of your story, hope you update soon in the future.^_^
5791531 Soooo self inert?
Ok, regarding the fic. It seems a little too convenient? buuuut its just the first chapter, I'm not calling this a Mary sue just because the story seems too perfect and convenient for the protagonist. Good luck with your fic Reinardtoma!
I can't wait to read this. I'm an old Cardcaptors fan. I lost track of the fanbase when they got rid of the English dub. So I have High hopes for this. Good luck.
5791531 I'm also looking forward to your story as well.
This needs heavy editing.
5791905 If you know a good editor i would be greatly appreciative of getting pointed in the right direction and I do hope to live up to your expectations any constructive criticism is much appreciated.
5791608 Thank you for giving it a chance there is to be an explanation on why it is so convenient at this point.
5791531 I'm interested to read it, doing a cross over could be very interesting ^-^
5791981 Don't you worry, just make sure it makes sense and doesn't seem too, you know, Mary Sue.
Have a fantastic day Reinardtoma!
5791981 Because I want you to succeed so much with this story, I'll help you edit this thing. If you want.
5794255 Sorry for taking so long to respond, i would greatly appreciate the help. I'll PM you a link as soon as I have chapter 2 ready.
No comments?
Lets fix that!
This is a great narrative so far, I can't wait to hear about this changelings exploits.
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Thank you for your comment^-^ I aim to please.
So now we've gotten to the point that we have Displaced who know they're fanfic characters because they've been reading Displaced fanfics. This could be really interesting.
I eagerly await my summons to a Doc! (after 4PM at least)
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there will be a bit of a delay as i am on vacation this week and will be away from my computer, but after...
Mwahahaha
Cool. Can't wait to see who's gonna help. BTW, would you like an editor?
Sure, reading, let's go with that…
tis a lie!!
Wait, what was that Shadow thing? Oh, and I think Gilgy will like singing with Boom.
Wow this gt saucy! I'm sure this wuld mean much more to me if I understood Avarice's story, but it's still pretty nice. Anyway, awaiting when Gilgamesh can join and d his thing.
Yay~ so good to see it posted~! Now everyone who's read Dox's bachelor parties can know how Avarice ended up like that. Once I finally manage to post the chapter of Hello Stranger that will finally get him back on his own business and I link all these anyway XD
... This going to be a weird crossover.
Every one keeps linking the first story Gilgamesh is in and not linking the second story, which is actually more accurate to the whole time line Shinigamisparda has chosen to set up. Small thing, but it's consistency keeps bugging me. Any way, Gilgy is practically the mobile dojo and master at this rate.
6146882 I believe the reason everyone points to the first story is because it IS the first story. No point on pointing someone to a sequel, and them have to find that out themselves. Surprisingly a lot of people are too lazy to go searching for previous installments than they are to move on to a sequel from a previous installment.
6147791 Fair enough, but why not link to both and say one is the sequel? I just answered my own question, didn't I? You know, I should not feel as disappointed as that makes me feel in regards to my fellow fans.
6147806 *pats back consolingly* it is okay to feel disappointment. Everyone is lazy to a degree, some just far more than others.
Thank you! Some one finally links the story in a way that works and makes sense to me! Also, if Gilgy had a month, he could probably get Duncan to the point of a specific type of imitator. After all, Gilgamesh is a power/strength type imitator with his ability set at this point. Any way, woo! Double update!
6166293 Thank you for your kind words. Let me know if you see more issues! I'll be happy to work on them.
6166299 Other than the rare minor grammar error (like one a chapter), I haven't noticed anything else that needs any work.
On one hand, that would be kind of awesome, on the other, it makes me worried about scheduling and multiple stories going on at once.
I didn't realize we were done with that chapter, but I guess it was a good stopping point.
A deeply troubled mind, broken by grief and loneliness at the depths of the soul. Now begins the recovery of Mistress Change.
5998661 here it is. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/252913/hello-stranger
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I guess sleep deprivation is not a good thing when it comes to communication skills.
Sorry I thought I said something
Mmmm, so gud. Can't wait for you two to finish your awesome series of crossovers, and OMIGOSH one of my least-popular stories is in the sidebar! EEE!
Okay, had my happy, geeky moment, anyhow, this was beautiful! I'm so glad to finally understand Missy better, and she and Avarice are in an a relationship, so now I'm kinda jelly at Gilgy for having such an intimate moment, like the boyfriend vs. girlfriend's best male friend who seems better in every way and makes you feel insecure
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Glad you are enjoying it, and don't fell left out, after all Avarices is Father to her baby, a very intament role for her^-^
Tackled, how has this gone unnoticed?
If card captor sukura is anything like this I might just give it a try.
Whooo awesome sauce by the way I need you for the next part of Displaced ponies. And we need to get Duncan over to Nuada's still
Reinard, the links failed, you forgot to redo them in the edit page.
Ah shinanigins, I miss Dox
Hmm... This has piqued my interest, I've never heard of the show mentioned, but it sounds like something I should check out....
I just realized something... HOW THE HELL DOE CRYSTAL WALL KNOW THAT DUNCAN IS A DISPLACED?!
Interesting start, first displaced fic I've seen where displaced are already known to someone in Equestria.
Oooooh, so she's a displaced too.
Poor Twilight, nobody values education like she does.
A displaced changeling, nice.
Hmm, now I wonder how Mistress Change's appearance in Equestria affected the events of the Canterlot wedding.
That went well. At least he's still alive, for now.
Every time I read the name Duncan, I'm thinking of Duncan Macleod.
Welp, that happened. Good for Morning, though she might not be able to walk tomorrow.
Weird that she Rudby react in any way to the mention of changelings.
Shadows, almost as deadly of enemies as... The floor!
Blob sex!