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Eyvind


I write pony fanfiction, mostly sappy romance stuff.

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It hurts when the one you love doesn't return your affections. But Daisy has always believed that giving up is for the weak, and she's not weak. Twilight will either love her, or be annoyed by her until she does.

[Takes place very early on in season one, before Twilight knew Daisy's name as seen in the episode where they meet Zecora.]

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episode where they meet Zacora.]

It's Zecora.

An interesting uncommon shipping. I will read this.
Her name is Zecora, not Zacora.

I'm buying you a new purse, and some milk.

Scooby doo.

And don't get a nosejob in Montana, you'll get abducted by aliens.

Nice uncommon ship by the way, I enjoyed it.

4521090 4521085 Fixed, thank you :twilightsmile:

Very nice writing! I saw a few missing punctuation marks here and there at the end of sentences. And don't forget that when you have something in quotations, there needs to be punctation after the sentence.

Ex)

Wrong: "I'm going to walk my dog" Jennifer said.

Right: "I'm going to walk my dog," Jennifer said.

Otherwise, nice work! I'll keep up with this story. ;)

4521174 Thank you for the advice and the encouragement :scootangel:

Huh. An odd shipping couple. But it seems rather legit. You have my attention, and for that, a favourite. I'm looking forward to seeing where this crazy couple go. I'm also going to guess that Lily will appear at some point too. They do make a trio after all.

4521223 I appreciate the fave. I'll try not to disappoint :twilightblush:

It must be true love! Never give up!

Yes, Daisy needs to adjust her tactics maybe a smidgen. But I am totally down with this ship. Carry on, good author!

4521498 :rainbowlaugh:That made me lol for real haha.


4522110 Will do :twilightsmile:

This has potential, I like it.

It's been a long time since I've read a story that takes place in Season 1. I look forward to seeing what comes next.

4522712 Thanks, me too :twilightsheepish:

Oh wow, don't see much fiction with Daisy! Roseluck gets more of the background pony love. Following this! :pinkiehappy:

Uncommon ship + well written + a fan of your work (me) = Like. Keep it up.

4522928 That gave me so many good feels, man! :pinkiehappy:

4522940 Only by Daisy's standards :raritywink:

I'm not sure whether I want Daisy to get the girl or the help she obviously needs.

My first Daisy Story good work.:heart::yay:

4525152 :rainbowlaugh: A tough choice indeed haha.

4526072 Mine too, thanks! :pinkiehappy:

CRAZY STALKER WE'RE GOING IN HARD!

(Meaning good job on the story)

4526766 Thanks! Dat translation though :pinkiecrazy:

Looks like I'm reading, too. :eeyup:

Twilight's in for a world of Inconvenient Daisy :pinkiecrazy:

4528954 Welcome to Daisy's herd :moustache:

Daisy, Daisy, give me your answer, do...
I'm (half) crazy, all for the love of you...
It won't be a stylish marriage...I can't afford a carriage!
But you'll look sweet
On the seat
Of a bicycle built for two!
:pinkiecrazy:

4531056 Now I'm trying to imagine what a bicycle built for a pony would look like :rainbowlaugh:

4531917
Maybe a much simpler looking version of what we use to account for the shapes and instead of rotating pedals, maybe some kind of alternating spring loaded ones?

4532494 I was thinking the pedals would work in reverse, sense their back legs bend inwards towards the front of the bike.

:rainbowlaugh:
Lesbian technicolor pony stalker! This is it. This is weirdness itself played like a normal romantic comedy.

4532830 It's only weird if you make it weird :raritywink:

This is creepy on many levels. Daisy needs to lay off the coffee, or Twilight needs to call the royal guard, one or the other.

I shall keep reading this, it amuses me.

4532978 Glad you are amused :pinkiesmile:

4532924
Making it weird makes it even funnier.

4533297 Then lets turn the weird up to 11 :pinkiecrazy:

This is just plain silly.

You earned random..... things for good story idea
:trollestia::moustache::duck::twistnerd::trixieshiftleft::derpytongue2::coolphoto::unsuresweetie::yay:

4539868 Do the random things come with money? :fluttercry:

JK, thanks for the compliment :derpytongue2:

This... this is just fantastic how long until you write the next part?

4540783 Thanks :twilightsheepish: My days off are Monday through Wednesday, so you can expect an update somewhere in there.

so simple yet so good

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