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Flora Spectrum


Hello! I'm a writer, singer, and artist. Feel free to message me with any questions and I'll get back to you! Have a wonderful day!

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A new stallion in the market place catches the eye of Daisy. However, when seen with a mare by his side, her fellow flower ponies, Lily and Rose take it upon themselves to intervene.

I've never read any fics about this trio, so their personalities are what I've come up with on my own. Nevertheless, I hope you enjoy!

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Comments ( 16 )

That was a really cute little story. I enjoyed the trio's interactions a lot. That's a like and a fave from me!

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“Are you two bucking insane!? Daisy cried snapping out of her state of shock. Her fellow flower ponies stared at her eyes wide and mouths agape.

You forgot a quotation mark after "insane!?"

“This one in particular,” she mare added pulling out a stained glass vase and placing it on the counter.

She mare probably was supposed to the The mare.

Other than those two spots, this was a rather cute story. I'll give it a like :twilightsmile:

3586234 I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the like and fav! :yay:

3586249 I'm glad you liked it! And thanks for pointing out those mistakes, I'll go back and fix them now :facehoof:

3586257 It's part of writing :pinkiesmile: Nothing to fret about.

It was nice and heart-warming. A cute little one-shot. Found one error:

“This one in particular,” she(should be "the") mare added pulling out a stained glass vase and placing it on the counter. “Oh, shoot it’s cracked. Honey, I’m going to go see if I can exchange it.” He nodded as she trotted across the path to the stall parallel to her ownDaisy's (.

Other than that, I felt like the last bit with the paint was a little cliche, but what the hay, I like cliches. :twilightsmile:

EDIT: Well, someone beat me to it. But nonetheless, great job!

3586267 Thanks I'm glad you liked it! And don't worry about someone else beating you to it, I'm always thankful for readers pointing out mistakes I missed :twilightsmile:

This is cute! I liked this, gonna go add it to some groups now. :pinkiesmile:

3586297 I'm glad you liked it! And thank you for adding them to more groups! :pinkiesmile:

Not a lot of meat to this. A cute, ephemeral story. Well worth the 10 minutes. :twilightsmile:

3590355 I'm happy it was worth the time :twilightsmile:

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Paint can get you a date!

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Sure is, I LOVE painting! When I was younger, I often draw things for the joy to paint it!:pinkiehappy:

3592295 My mom told me that when I was little I could sit in the same sport for hours doing nothing but painting and coloring :yay:

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