Friends never say goodbye... Right? Sadly, there is one thing that cannot be fixed with the magic of friendship, as a group of six close friends suddenly discover. Can their friendship survive the one inevitable end of all things?
(Note: This story was inspired by Deathscar's version of End of the Rainbow. If you haven't read his yet, I really recommend checking it out. Here's the url: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17885/end-of-the-rainbow.) Anyway, I hope you enjoy. Constructive criticism is welcome.
Chapters (7)
You should link to the story you mention here.
4463245 In the chapter itself, or in the description of the story? If you mean in the description of the story, a link has been added to my description that will lead to the fanfic that inspired this one.
4466132 I'm glad you liked it! I put a lot of work into that chapter, and it's nice to see that someone else enjoyed it too!
This made me cry the hardest I have this year. THE FEELS!
But yeah, great chapter! I SHALL READ MORE.
SO MANY FEELS I CANT TAKE IT. LOL.
I spy with my little eye, something beginning with nice reference. ;3
4481876 which reference are you referring to? There are quite a few references in this story. By the by, glad you're enjoying this!
This story was awesome, but now I am sad.
4629625 Well, it was a sad story, so I guess it suceeded at what it was. Glad you liked the story though!
OMG!! this chapter was so amazing can't wait to read more
4761219 Glad it left such an impression!
Read up to chapter 2 and this is a comment on what I've read so far: You started out fine, however once chapter 2 got going, it started to rush into things. You could have presented it a bit better than you did (milked out the despair, if you will). Just off what I've read so far, it seems like a slightly detailed plot summary. Hope this helps.
5030881 Yeah, I kinda see where you're coming from. Back when I wrote this, I really didn't get pacing down very well. I ended up rewriting chapter 1 a couple weeks back because of that, and I'm planning on doing the same for the other chapters when I don't have any new fanfic ideas in my head. Oh well, thanks for the tip! Cheers
5031829 Another small tip: when you do rework the chapters, I'd recommend pulling them down and reposting them back up. It lets the people who have 'favorited' it know the chapters is new.
Wow this story is awesome!
Just wow... Nicley done. I like the mood and the story was realy interesting.... Grammar was good from what I saw and the pacing was solid. It was so Awesome
. I give it 4 Derpys out of 5. 
6049931 Thanks; I'm glad you enjoyed it! If I may ask, what kept it from getting the 5th Derpy? Cheers
6056140 Killing Pinkie First... LOL Just joking...
I usually only give out 4 Derpys to stories I read... The 5th one really doesn't matter, its just a thing I do. It just sounds better when its written like that.
If I would give it a reason behind it, and this is nit picking at its finest. I would say that maybe having a small short chapter where we get to see Twilight's, Rainbow Dash's and Fluttershy's personal thoughts fleshed out a bit more on the events that they just witnessed. Like a one on one. But its minor and not really a big deal...
Overall the story is good and I like it.... Keep up the good work.
Oh gosh, I cried on literally every single chapter. Bravo!! This has a fav from me!
6324919 Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! Cheers