Is an interspecies relationship between a human and a pony possible?
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4426012 midway on chapter three there seams to be another italics tag out of place [i/]
4426113 Fixed
Okay. I just have to say that the preview pic from the main page? It looks like Ditzy has a giant dildo strapped to her head.
I'll be in my bunk.
I really liked this, it felt very genuine.
4426307 Darn you, what has been seen cannot be unseen.
Sequel, please
I like it . Would love to see a follow up story
this just feels like lazy writing to me.
it'd be better if you just wrote what they did, there's really no need for the parentheses.
EDIT: read the whole thing, glad you got rid if the parentheseseseseses.
4426452 I honestly don't know why I didn't get rid of the parentheses; I knew they weren't needed yet I left them in. They're gone now.
You, i like it, write moar.
-Miyoyo
This story was nice, to say the very least. And I thing a sequel could be interesting. think about it, Sam's tries to get his life in order now that he's no longer just a friend to Derpy. but a mate as well, and also a father to Dinkey. Could be interesting, and a story I would definitely read...
I, THE GREAT KING BRONYCUS, DEMAND THOU MAKETH A SEQUEL TO THIS STORY WITH A CUTENESS LEVEL OF OVER 9000...if thats ok with you.
4427053 I, THE GREAT CREEPER CHEWED PENCIL, SECONDS THIS MOTION!
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S'alright, I liked the whole shebang once I finished it.
Top work Mr Author ma man!
4427218 Yeah it's interesting so far, and I really like that Ditzy in the mare in question. I allways felt the she should have a role that wasn't just comedy relief.
cute story
DINKY
DINKY, FINALLY A DINKY STORY THAT IS NOT A EVERYONE
Honestly though, I really liked how you made this more of a family building story and a clop.
made it 100 liks I feelz special
Very cute.
4427611 THANK YOU!!! I was literally just looking at that 99 wondering when it would hit the big 1 double 0
beautiful! truly hart warming!! amazingly written!!! i love this story so much, wish there was more chapters to it!!!! i love these characters especially!!!!! thank you for sharing this story with us!!!!!! until next time.... PEACEEEE!!!!!!!
4426318 I'm glad you liked it, and I'm glad you thought it sounded genuine; that's always my goal when I write these types of fics.
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That was my goal when writing Derpy. I'd written her for another fic, and I ended up making her a goofy, and comical, but I ended up getting criticized for it. With this one I wanted to make her realistic; clumsy, and a bit silly, without simply being comic relief.
4427580 I'm glad you liked it. I love these types of stories where the focus isn't on the clop, but on the development of the characters, and the story.
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You guys are lucky; while I hadn't initially planned to write a sequel for this story, I've actually been working out an idea for a sequel using a few scrapped ideas from this story. So sometime in the future, Sam, Derpy, and Dinky will return.
4428096 Huzzah! You have made my day good sir!
4427516 I KNOW!!! Aside from Sweetie Belle (and sometimes Scootaloo), Dinky is my favorite filly, so I just had to include her in this story.
4428307 Dinky is best filly, other than CMC.
4428035 That's worth shooting for. I've been working towards the same.
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If it is an intelligent being capable of knowing right and wrong then what is to stop you? If it is a animal HELL NO it would be beastialty. Only if it is a sentient being do you DO it.If you know what I mean.
" Fill my muffin"....
So no explanation for possible child neglect. I was so sure that dinky calling Sam daddy and then feeling betrayed by derpy would cause some drama but that doesn't really fit dinky. She's too loving. Still I have a hard time believing derpy would just abandoned dinky. And that letter wouldn't necessarily ruin the surprise.
I loved this story...
And so we come full circle. From quality feels, to mindless porno, to feels again.
I had hoped to get through without the sex scenes being too graphic (my feels stay separate, thank you very much), but so it goes.
I stopped reading the point you had her turn into a human just so they could have sex... Very poor execution... Seriously are you that miffed by seeing an equestrian pony and human make out that you chose to turn her into a human just so they could fuck? I was hoping he could get over the fact she was of a different species that they could focus on whats important. The love they feel for one another.
And the 3rd chapter where you have the dream sequence with him and Luna is now all but pointless! Why bother going to such lengths having even Luna herself show him that it doesn't matter whats on the outside, but the love that each other feel on the inside that matters most.
I was gonna upvote this story as it was working out to be really well done. Heck I even choked up when Dinky called him daddy...
You have lost my vote for just another poor attempt at depicting a decent human on pony relationship.
4429724 maybe if you had finished that scene, you might have been a bit more pleased (but only a bit more pleased) (Hint: she doesn't remain a human through the entire scene).
4429845 No I would not have said yes right away. It just felt like the excuse was just the usual standard. "Ew... its a pony I can't have sex with that!"
4429829 Yeah, I went through it again and see that he did want to see her as a pony. though it still felt like the story went from emotional to clop. (Not that I don't like clop, but this was a bit on the heavy side)
this was awesome there seriously needs to be more Human x Derpy stories on this site there adorable
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You think THIS is heavy clop? Oh god you lightweight.
What, do you fast-forward through the sex scenes in action or romance movies, too? As far as porn goes this was the equivalent of a fade-to-black scene. It was feelsy and tasteful considering.
4429968 Heh... Guess I just don't hang in the darker parts of Equestria after dark eh?
This was a great story. I'm glad it showed how much Derpy would do for love, also for Sam to get over his hang ups to realize love is universal in its application. The love making was nice and nothing over the top. It was especially nice to see he liked her as she is. I think people forget he's in equestria now, so time to toss the old taboos away! Again loved the story!