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NotProud
I am not proud of what I do but sometimes it must be done.
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Can you not?
Okay, just repeat after me:
"Universe, I am sorry.
I am not funny.
I thought I could be the Honey Nut Cheerios honeybee
but I can nut."
You got my intrest up to the end
References do not a funny make. Stahp pls.
OK..... that was something, that happened, I guess?
At least no spelling mistakes and kinda sound structure, not a story I like, but structurally sound
Why,.. just why?
The kindest thing I can say about this is that at least it shows writing more competent than a lobotomized monkey. Everything else is just... bland. Shit, not even the 'juicy' bits near the end got anything more than a 'meh'. I can't even get worked up that it's another goddamned, motherfucking, soulless, LoHAV fic without an original bone in its body. That's something that takes effort.
If you're looking to offend, or disgust, or anger, you're gonna have to crank up the bullshit a lot higher than it is now, because this is tame compared to other stuff on this site.
Well... I don't know what I was expecting... but it wasn't actually this. I dunno, I was kinda hoping for a longer story with a bit of adventure... I did like the personality conflict, and I think that would make an excellent story. The vore part, although I do enjoy the fetish, just seemed completely out of place. It has the trappings of a good idea, just needs a bit of polish and flare.
Why did you do this? LOHAV? After Cloppy Pasta...?
I'm so disappointed in you.
ah a perfect example of this villainous humans fad, glad people are beginning to see that they are mostly the same
are you anti-furry or something because this is bad
it started good ended horribly bad
p.s i really don't like that ending it's just ewww
Furries are fucking retarded
This pretty much sum up my thoughts
WHYYYYY!!! It was really good. Boo vore. And there is no yiffing.
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i did not think this was possible
What the hell...?
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Neither did I, but then... This happened.
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You're in quite the position to judge, aren't you?
This doesn't deserve all the hate it's gotten, so I upvoted.
i.imgur.com/YPMBk3x.jpg
Someone take the keyboard from this guy and feverishly beat him with it.
Will someone tell why people are aroused by vore? what is so attractive about being swallowed whole?
4459033 piss of you wanker
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Yes, yes, how dare I not fervently hate furries?
I should write a furry story of my own now... and make it excellent, just to piss the fur-haters off.
This story is actually quite well-written. The only reason I can fathom for all the downvotes is that it features a furry.
Can't you people see that this is wrong? You're no better than the brony-haters.
4688156 you thought i was calling you a wanker for liking furrys. I would never do that because i my self am i furry i called you a wanker because you were engoreing bad writting.
While it may be bad at my part for calling you wanker. And i will say that i am sorry for that. But you have to understand it just gets under my skin when people who are capable of writting good stories (and i shall admit this well written (the first half anyway) who use a good idea as an excuse for smut. ( il Admit that i do read alot of smut)
But here the thing we don't hate this story because it features a furry we hate it because it is complete and utter fucking shit.
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thankyou?
this is a good reson to hate the story i think
also not sure that i write good stuf?
4713849 i never lie my good sir
It was so bad it was good like a pug. And just so much what the fuck, it's funny.
Ok, rules here:
MLP = good
Furries = ?
Vore = nononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononosinsononononononeoftheabovenononononononononononononononononononononononono
...what the ever loving motherbucking fuck did I just read?