I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.
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When Pinkie Pie took up the role of fortune teller for Twilight in "It's About Time" she never expected anypony to take it seriously. But the citizens of Ponyvillie don't know that and it isn't long before they're all lining to up to see "Madame Pinkie Pie" predict the future, which soon becomes a major pain in the flank for Pinkie Pie.
This is my first fanfic so please rate and leave comments.
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Oh this is going to be good.
*rubs hooves together mischievously*
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405482 Heavy likes dis picture.
I like it. A few things though, you mispelled a few things. and make sure that there is a new paragraph for every time the speaker switches. I know that it seems like a bother sometimes, but it helps. I like where this story is going, keep it up.
Dis... wasn't dat gud.
I like the concept, but the execution is way off. The constant references to other episodes made it seem like you were trying to force this to be in canon(the exceptions being the intro, which was necessary, and Rainbow's question, which I thought was nice). Also, the description seemed to get repetitive and also out of character for Pinkie. I think this story would work better if told from the standard 3rd person perspective. Lastly, Twilight in the episode didn't buy Pinkie for a second, so why would she randomly start after they get back?
405575 I don't be mean to be rude but there's no proof that Twilight was not convinced in the episode, she even asked Pinkie Pie to use her Pinkie Sense.
Also I'm trying to explain some things that fans might be wondering, such as for example what ever happened to Gilda.
And as for the first person that's what makes the story intresting.
"But um you know what ever you wanna do is fine." *Squee*
Hey can anyone see the image I uploaded?
If not can you help me figure out how to do that?
:405510 Well I'm glad you like it. And in other words Sandvich so moist and delcious, sandvich I'm coming for you, sandvich, sandvich, sandvich, sandvich!
408676 Om nom nom, nom, nom.
408693 Was that delicous or what?
409311 YUS! Time to kill BLU team,
Ooh it's coward killing time!
Hello everypony there's a totally awesome new chapter up just waiting to be read. I hope you enjoy it.
Don't forget to leave a comment and be honest about what you liked and didn't like, that'll help this fanfic be even better.
Um hello is anypony out there?
I feel like I'm talking to a tree.
Still nothing huh, guess you guys are all on Spring Break. Speaking of which next week I'll be going to Disney World and Universal Stuidos, aw yeah! So after Easter I'll be gone until late Friday or Saturday and that mean's you'll have to wait awhile for this story to be completed. Still I hope to have at least one more chapter up before Easter.
In the mean time enjoy the improved chapter 1 when you get the chance to see it.
Hey everypony Happy Easter! Here's chapter 5 for your viewing pleasure.
Please post comments ASAP because I want to know just how good I'm doing on my first fanfic, I need all the feedback I can get! *Diamond Tiara slams desk*
I'm still waiting for that feed back guys. Please tell me if I'm doing a good job.
Come on you know you can't resist.
Oh, I was busy reading all kinds of new updates on my Favorite stories, Being spring break and all, >.>
Heavy will put this on read later,
Sorry if I haven't updated in forver, I haven't had a lot of free time with no distractions.
But I really want to see more comments, if isn't too much trouble?
I apologize for how long I've held off on the next chapter, I promise I won't try to do this again.
A few spelling mistakes, but.....
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802169 Thanks and be sure to check out my other story 'Big Macintosh's Day Off' if you have the time.
Hey everyone I figured since I'm putting this on hiatus I might as well revise all the chapters, I hope you enjoy them.
(Here's one idea I'll use in part 3 of my second story 'Big Macintosh's Day Off' be sure to read it if you haven't already)
Hey everyone sorry it took so long to get this new chapter out but well real life got in the way and I guess I kind of became obessed with my other fanfics.
But I'm back on track now and I'm aiming to finish this story by the end of the month.
Here's Chapter 8 everypony, sorry it's so short. I'm kind of winding down here since I only have 2 more chapters planned for this story.
Here is Chapter 9, one chapter left and then this fic will be complete. Sorry if it's kind of meh but hey it's my first fanfic.
Once this is done I'll be taking a bit of a break until Season 3 starts up in about 2 weeks. I'll still be here and I could still use help but my next fanfic won't likely be up until the middle to end of next month.
And with this I have offically ended my first fanfic. Sorry if it was kind of meh.
I'll be taking a break now at least until Season 3 premieres next week.
I like your story. It's pretty funny. But be reminded to start a new paragraph when two different ponies speak Example:
"I don't like this. It tastes bad," complained Rainbow Dash.
"Would you just be quiet and eat it?! Twilight obviously tried hard to make this!" yelled Applejack.
Other than that, and your grammatical or spelling errors, it's a nice story. Keep it up!
1676509 Well I'll admit I did make a lot of mistakes but then this was my first fanfic, I have improved somewhat since than.
Well this doesn't sound familiar in the slightest.
Anyway, good job on your first fic and may there be many more in the future.
1854985 I've already completed three more and the fifth fic is in progress.
I've also planned out to about my 15th fanfic, which includes crossovers with "Dr. Weird", "Transformers The Movie" and "Ape Escape" as well as some padded ponies stories and just general slice of life stories.
419268 The only problem is that you lack some commas. Here are some for you: ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I know this was your very first story, but like I said, I'm gonna go through all your stories and tell you the pros and cons
Even though I don't like critiquing and want to say everypony's story is good. I'm sure most, if not all of these pros and cons have been said at one point by somepony else 
).
Cons: some minor incomplete sentences, punctuation problems, starting new paragraphs for seperate speakers. I also feel like you were using the fourth wall thing in order to make it seem like it wasn't fast paced. That's just how I felt. Maybe that wasn't your intention, but I dunno
Pros: I felt as if I was playing the story through my head like an episode. If I'm able to do that with a story, I usually enjoy reading it! Story structure's pretty good, Pinkie Pie personality is spot on (but I'll probably expect that in most of these stories with Pinkie Pie. Your name after all is superpinkbrony12
There we are. Off to Big Macintosh's Day Off
3301221 Wow, that's probably the nicest review I could've gotten for something that even I feel is fairly bad.
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Ahaha trust me. There's a lot more bad stories than this or my one-shotters
3303625 You really think so huh? Well I guess the old saying's true "You're your own worst critic."