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Calm Wind
We writers do not speak. We do not hear. We have no songs. We have no pictures. We only have scripture. From words we bring images. From words we bring emotion. From words we bring life.
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So why'd you post this as a separate story instead of a chapter of the story it's ostensibly part of?
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Because the rest of the story was for a contest where no clop was allowed.
4313665 Ahh, OK. Carry on then.
I hope you brought enough smut for the rest of your ships, young man/lady!
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GAH DONT TEMPT ME! I'm already on my fifth shower since i posted this ARRRGHHHHH
OMG LOLOLOL I LOVE YOU
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i gave in to the urge...
have mercy on my soul...
Well, this is a surprise.
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i'm currently playing the fuck out of roller coaster tycoon to desperately cling to my childhood innocence
4313820 And about the mercy issue
4313820 Everyone has to give in some day.
R.I.P
Calm Wind's Innocence
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i already deleted the word document from my laptop lol BUT ITS TOO LATE AAAGGHBLARGHBHBH
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Listen to me. I wrote a clop story once. I felt no better than you. I wanted to throw up. I felt disgusting. But... you come to terms with it. Just remember that it's all in fun, and keep your head held high.
That aside, this was pretty good, but you REALLY need to stop capitalizing words even if you REALLY want to put A TON of emphasis on them. Just look at this. Isn't reading it REALLY REALLY ANNOYING?
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good point, fixing now.
never thought of that
I wrote ponies having sex. Dear god what have i done?
it's a step we all take sooner or later...
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y'know i've been doing that unconsciously for a while and no one has brought it up until now. i think i'm gonna go all the way back through flying sky high and weight of responsibility and fix all of it.
And thanks, im mostly playing up how dirty i feel because i was so adamant against it before finally doing it.
But like you said, it was an experience. And i did have some fun writing it.
When I saw the title of this I first thought.
"OH GOD YES"
And after all that you said to me :>
I will never let you live this down either. >:D
No but seriously thank you :D I just feel really guilty now so... Yeah. Shower time I guess xD
Keep being awesome!
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it was on my mind and refused to leave. I couldn't concentrate on WoR haha
So i vomited onto a word document and submitted it
Will there be a chapter 19 at the end of weight of responsibility?
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
! Is it wrong that i laughed at your author's notes because I found them pretty funny. Also I've read a few clop fics and thought "ok whatevs" but I read this one and I think "oh my.... so lude" (not sure how to spell that) I'm guessing the reason behind that is that your one of the last people I would expect to write this type of fic. Didn't make it any less enjoyable though. I give this 10/5 Rainbows.
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no.
This was a one time thing.
I came so close to the edge of the cliff with Flying Sky High intentionally. I wasn't expecting both the urge and the demand from some readers for the sex scene. It made me take the dive
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haha thanks, i was NEVER supposed to write this, but my adventurous writing spirit power bombed me and pressed my face to my keyboard until i wrote it.
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i hear you. I feel like a sick bastard atm.
But at the same time, i like to challenge my comfort zone as a writer. i have regrets and no regrets at the same time
I won't pester you about it ^^. I don't really consider this clop since it came from a very well paced storyline. You built up to this in all the right ways so you should have no regrets about writing it, I mean seriously they faced death together many times and fell in love throughout the process. They deserve some loving.
I consider clop to be rushed with no prior setup or anything making it just a story cloppers jack off to. I am not one but do enjoy these extra tender moments at times :D Of course this would be clop if you read it separately from the rest if your storyline though.
However I do understand you feel uncomfortable writing it and that is perfectly fine by me :3 well done sir. You are my #1 author for all the right reasons.
That was....wow but nontheless it was still a goos read "akward brohoof"
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yeah that was actually one of the reasons i went through with it. It was connected to the main story and they had a REASON for doing it. I didn't write just because i suddenly felt like writing random sex. To be completely honest if this was one of my non pony works, i wouldn't have batted an eye at writing a sex scene because it would've felt incomplete without it.
so in a way, it felt fine. But still, pony sex, kids show, ehhhhhhhhh...
I wasn't quite sure if this was them fucking or a crazy fight scene.
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haha,
I like to write them being very physical with each other in general (not just in sex)
(Your comment admittedly made me laugh
)
Well, that just happend, GG calm, GG
:O....Dear Celestia....The dark side of the FIC is strong with this one. Power ful Author, he/she will become
What have you done 0_o
Welcome to the dark side, cookies are in the kitchen!
Well, whilst unexpected, this was certainly good.
Well...if you think about it, you've technically already written about them having sex and just haven't gone into...detail...
Also, it's kinda weird when you think about how selectively squeamish we can be, I mean...
I mean, it's not like you haven't written graphic scenes about ponies from a kids show being violently beaten and nearly killed (and not-so-nearly in one particular case). But bring up sex and suddenly
We authors are a peculiar bunch sometimes.
You haven't been here very long have you?
Understandable. I see the show and the fanfiction as two entirely different things to prevent thoughts like those. Either way I can t wait for the next chapter of WoR!
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this is a very good point.
i guess sex is just a very different and personal thing. This isn't the first time i've written sex in a fanfic, i guess since i'm not a clopper nor really much of a brony compared to some it just made me twitch and churn as i wrote it. But i did walk on thin ice with some of my love scenes in Flying sky high, so its not like i had to take a leap over the edge.
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I
DON'T
KNOW
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i gave in
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MFW i had to turn off my mature filter to view one of my own stories
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0_o
4316101 So what? You did so beautifully. I have written several clop fics, and I say you did well here.
In fact, I would go on to say it's probably better than what I've created.
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thanks, i just feel so dirty...
Stich777 put it well though, the reason i ended up writing this was because it was built up to in Flying Sky-High and it meant something between the characters. I didn't just wake up yestaerday and decide: "i'm gonna write pony sex!"
After lots of hesitation and LOTS of caffeine, i wrote this.
4316168 Funny... waking up and thinking that was exactly how I started!
At first, when on this site, I had the sex tag blocked, but it made me miss out on a few good stories that were tagged teen along with it. Then I bit the bullet and read a mature one, and here I am.
So, don't dirty. Yes, you wrote pony sex, but... how to put this? It wasn't just sex, as I have read, but emotion was involved as well. I wish more mature fics could be like this. (Maybe even one of my own, but that's not here nor there!)
wHY WOULD YOU DO THIS?!??!?/! THIS IS MY LITLLE PONT: RIENEDSHIP IS NAGIC NOT SEX IS MSGIC ARGH I'M SO MAD YET S HAPPY AT THE SME TIME I HT UOYU
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a moment of weakness
4318368 Oh my goodness. I need to work on my typing skills when I'm mad. Look at how bad my spelling was.
Dat Spelling Doe
4318381 no worries, it was fun to decipher
4318422 Okay, sorry about that.
Ponies getting beat and bludgeoned half to death: Completely okay
Sex: JESUS CHRIST HOW COULD YOU YOU ARE WORSE THAN HITLER
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