While bogged down in her work, Rarity receives a surprise visit from a very important individual. This is the chance she's been waiting for to make a name for herself, but how does one impress a pony who is seemingly perfect in every way? A story of believing in your ability to succeed. You never know when you'll catch the eye of just the right Pony.
Featuring fan art by: Those Kids in the Corner
This story has not been fully edited yet, i apologize for anything sloppy.
(Story was recently separated into 4 chapters... this is not new content ) (But apparently doing that got it in the feature box So... WOO! FEATURED! 2/22/2015!)
She derped
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thanks for reading
Np good fic
I really try not to be nitpicky, but...
Doesn't she LIVE in Ponyville? Think you meant Canterlot there.
Sight
Capitalize the S in spike.
Damn... I never even thought of Fancy Pants like that! So that's why they're all on the cover!
Well... NEXT!
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ahhhhh thank you very much for pointing these things out, i'm such an editing newb
4105851 I never used to notice them, but after writing my first fic, they started jumping out at me.
Like pretty much everything else you've written, very enjoyable. You've also raised my opinion of Fancy Pants from an ehh to where I think he's kinda cool.
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thank you! this story in particular has gotten very little attention which kinda crushed my will to write for a while because it took me a long time to write due to lots of life stuff.
My goal with each of my main stories is to give my take on some of the male characters i've liked in the show, but haven't been given much developement (at least before season three, i wrote soft spoken almost two years ago ). Big Mac, Soarin, Fancy, Braeburn, Thunderlane, and (spoiler cause i still havent written one of them )
But honestly, thanks, seeing a review notification for this story was great cause i rarely get one
In my opinion thunderlane is in someways the same as rainbow dash only lazier, and not as fast or competitive.
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yeah, thats actually what i was going for. As weight of Responsibility continues, his similar personality to her's will show through and be important towards the the resolution of the conflict
hmm. guess i better start reading apple in the corner faster then...
Holy shit man, how far down does this rabbit hole of sequels go?! All I wanted to read was read that Shining/Cadance date comedy fic DX
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Lol it's not really sequels as much as a timeline. They all stand alone, (except flying sky high and weight of responsibility)
You can read whichever one you want without being confused
My user page has the timeline drawn out
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That may be true, but I can tell you firsthand... You pick up so much more when you read them in line. The little references you make, or the little things that work differently in your world make a lot of sense when you've been introduced to them prior. Like Mac's super-strength, or Dash pulling an apple cart.... Or that awesome pony jujitsu
Keep up the good work, Calm Winds!
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Thank you!
I prefer to say they mostly stand alone because i know people sometimes come to the site looking for specific things.
But as you said, there are little things that i keep consistent for those who have read them in line to give shape to my own pony universe and the rules that exist in it. This is the first time i've ever written a series and it's been great having an extended timeline where everything is familiar as i go. It's my own personal pony world
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I have the same goal for my own stories: make my own unique mark upon the world and each of the characters in it, and have all my stories have their own distinct place in it.
You have achieved what I aspire to accomplish...
You're simultaneously my envy and my inspiration... Thank you!
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I'm always glad to inspire good luck in your writing!
It is a shame that this isn't as well known, it's certainly no worse than the others!
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Thank you very much for reading it!
Funny, I had the same idea. And in December too. But it doesn't include shipping, and it's about Rarity and Applejack's friendship. Might work on it one day.
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actually this is my one story that isn't about shipping
While i do like fancypantsxRarity im purposely not shipping rarity and possibly twilight to not be repetitive
(nothing against unicorns, i actually have a hard time writing for rarity and twilight )
4788681 I didn't read this one yet because I had to go to bed, so I just assumed it was about shipping. My bad.
Question, is this a rarityxfancy pants shipping?
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No. This is the one fic that has no implied shipping in it. This fic was rather experimental, i focused on lots of description and more of a simple plot (with a little bit of action cause i couldn't help it) There is lots of interaction between them, but it's not romance related.
Thanks for commenting though, it's like... once in a 1000 years whenever someone says anything about this fic
5022871 no problem, this fic deserves as much attention as all of your other tics like piercing the heavens
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thank you, i really appreciate it
This tends to be the story "skipped over" so every kind word i get for it is cherished
I'm glad that I read this. It was especially captivating during the Diamond Dog scene. It was cool to see how much he was holding back since Piercing The Heavens showed what he is really capable of.
I did find this though
Fleur-de-lis gasped as she saw Fancy all scuffed up and bruised, quickly moving to asses him.
Quite a interesting mistake you have there...
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THANK YOU for reading this and reviewing, it means a lot to me
and oh damn... thats been there for a LONG time *fixes*
As much as I liked Fancy in his debut episode, you've given him a lot more to enjoy in this story alone!
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Thank you!!!
I'm very glad you enjoyed this story, i'm sure you've seen a blog post or two about me being sad about this story. It hasn't recieved anywhere near the same attention as my others, but i am proud of it
I always fealt Fancy Pants had lots of character potential. He's looked upon as an icon of perfection in the show by all those around him, so i HAD to build on that, but of course also show some slight cracks in the armor as well. I wanted to give him a vibe sort of like this haha:
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5204866 And as far as I know, which is shorter than most everybody else, you did that near perfectly!troll.me/images/business-cat-needs/great-job.jpg
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Thanks!
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This is one of the few stories by you that I hadn't read and I'm surprised I didn't. I loved it! Aside from your soarindash stories, this is one of my favourites now
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Thanks! i'm glad you enjoyed it!
WHERE'S THE SEQUEL?????
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It's done, being edited. should be out tonight
5657427 But it is now tonight for me! You're gonna release it when I'm asleep!
Really good story, even though i can't wait till reading soarindash again.One thing that was in my head all the time while i was reading this; it would have been PERFECT as an episode of mlp fim. And that's really awesome, plus it's very well written!
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Yep, on a few of these i tried to keep it similar to the show format Glad you enjoyed it! i hope you enjoy the rest!
You troll. That is all I have to say at the moment.
So many cross overs I'm choking.*gag gag*Goodbye cruel world.*falls while gaging then drops ded*
Still has no one seriously commented on this story. So many HITC references.
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well im known for the fluttermac and soarindash stories despite all of the stories being connected in the same world, most of my readers go straight fore the shipping
Thanks so much for reading this one though, it really hasn't gotten half the attention of some of my older stories
Why doesn't this have more likes?!
This was amazing to read! I know shipping is really 'in' right now, but don't neglect everything else!
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I'm SO GLAD you liked this story!
As you said... it hasn't gotten quite as much recognition as some of the others
read, liked and endorsed, my friend.
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Thanks you! Glad you liked it!
Dear Calm you certainly put TLC in this (tender, love, and couture)