Hi my name is Louise and I live in Swden. My hobbies are. Drawing, Games and MLP (alot).
The changelings are back. Stronger then before. it's now up to Rain Drop, Sky Flower and Shining armor to stop them. Will they stop them in time or will the changelings take over Equestria forever? Everything will show in the srory. When Rain Drop got an later from the princess. And she needs to come to Canterlot at once
Thanks Lightning Splash for editing the story
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A lot of grammatical errors, misspellings abound and Mary Sueish OCs.
An overused plot, as well.
Best idea? Rethink the plotline and get an editor.
EDIT: Also, you misspelled "Changeling" in the title. And the title is in the wrong format.
EDIT2: This also very rushed.
I have not even opened the story to the first chapter...
Either get some decent form of spell check so it is at least decent or get someone to edit your fic as you write.
OKey okey okey. I know I have some wrongs in it. But English is my scond language. and I don't know how to fix an editer. And I know this chaper is short but I was writing on my phone. And the next chapter is much more longer. I promes
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Try clicking the button that looks like ">>" in the upper right corner of a comment. It lets you know that you've responded.
Look here: For Editors.
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Thanks for the link. I'm cheaking it right now. And I hope my stories will get better in the future
4691897 It's not Changling it Changeling
4692093 Thanks, did not notice that
4692093 nice profile pic you got there
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Thanks
4692747 It's odd, I've ad this same profile picture for years, and not one person ever commented on it, but the moment I joined this website, about 1 and a half years ago, people started commenting on it, is it because it's a car in a sea of ponies and therefore it sticks out? Or is it something else? Whatever, thanks for the complement!
4694404 not sure either, but it's nice to see something different once in a while
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I was trying to find something different. But it fit so good to the story
If you want I cam help you with format on your story. I noticed its written just running and no format along the story. Nevertheless, nice story. If you want a proofreader I can help you as well
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I would love to. Thank you so so much
4744573 No problem =D