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Rain Drop was a Pegasus pony who lived in the southern part of Cloudsdale. She has blue body and her mane is purple. Her cutie mark was four rain drops.
Not far away lived her friend, Sky Flower. She was a light pink Pegasus with a summer pink mane, which was very curly. Sky Flower’s cutie mark was a sunflower hidden behind two clouds.
Rain Drop and Sky Flower met at a flight camp three years ago and have been best friends ever since.
One day when Rain Drop was at home on lazy Sunday she heard a knock on her door. When she opened her door, a mail pony stood waiting patiently. He gave her a letter and flew away with a smile on his face. Rain Drop opened the letter slowly and began to read.
Dear, Rain Drops, I need you in Canterlot at once. I have a mission for you. I will let you bring one friend, but no more. I will await your arrival.
-Princess Celestia.
Rain Drop couldn't believe her eyes. The princess had sent her a letter. Why? She walked over opened her window, a fresh cold summer breeze cooled her face. The sun was fairly bright; she didn’t realize how early it was. She flew out her window, in the blue sky.
She decided to fly over to Sky Flower’s house, she should bring her along. Rain Drop took a breath before she knocked on the door. Sky Flower opened the door slowly, her eyes were glazed and she had a dopey look on her face. She must have just gotten out of bed.
"Sky, you can't believe what just had happened to me!" Rain Drop said excited, her voice was reaching the maximum squealing point. Her friend was still looking tired but invited her in. Sky Flower was started to make breakfast for her and her friend while Rain Drops talked about what had happen to her that morning. "Okay, so I was just lounging on my couch when I heard this knock on the door." Sky Flower nodded absent mindedly. “So this mail guy gave me this letter, look!” Rain Drops gave her friend the letter so she could read it.
Sky Flower’s eyes widened. "Wow Rains, you got a letter from the princess." She said, but there wasn’t an ounce of excitement. "When are you going?" She sounded a little bit sad.
"We are going today." Rain Drop said, a big grin spread across her face. However, Sky Flower’s face looked really confused. "That's right! You and I are going to Canterlot, it's going to be so much fun. Aren’t you excited?"
"Excited? No... look, I'm sorry Rains. But I can't go to Canterlot, I was born in this city and I'm going to die in it to." Sky Flower was always afraid of leaving Cloudsdale, anything that was on the ground scared her. She always thought clouds were safer, which was stupid, ‘cause clouds can crumble and fall.
"Oh come on, Sky.” Rain Drop started to whine. “Don't you want to meet the princess? She wanted me to bring a friend." She batted her eyes and made a pouty face.
"Rains you know really I hate like the ground. It's safer up here in the clouds." Here we go, the cloud talk. All she ever wanted was to stay in her home.
"Please, you know how big this is a big opportunity for me. Won’t you understand?" She made a hurt face, she knew how to get her way with Sky Flower. She started to make puppy dog eyes. Sky Flower winced and tried to look away, but it was no use.
"Okay, okay, I give up.” Sky Flower said exasperated. “We're going to Canterlot."
“Hmmph.” Rain Drop grunted smugly. "Okey dokey, lokey, we need to go, now. Lucky you, I know a shortcut."
Thanks to the shortcut it took them only one hour to get to Canterlot. From the looks of it, Canterlot wasn’t doing so well. The streets were empty and silent. In the corner of an alley there was green stuff that looked like spider web. "Where is everypony?” Rain Drop pondered. “It's like a ghost town. You know, like in those scary movies."
"I think the princess will tell us why all the Canterlot ponies are gone." Sky Flower said, a hint a worry in her voice. When they came to the castle they got stopped by a royal guard.
"HALT! WHO'S GOING THERE!" The royal guard yelled in a deep voice. It took them a second to realize he was talking to them, he was staring straight ahead, without so much as glance toward Sky Flower and Rain Drop.
"My name is Rain Drops and this is my dear friend, Sky flower. We are here to see the princess. So if you could move your flank just a little to the right so we can get through…"
"NOPONY IS GOING TO PASS ME! Captins order."
"I would like to talk to that captain, where is he? The princess sent me a letter, it says that she wants me to be here." Rain Drops took up the peice of paper and gave it to the royal guard. He furrowed his brow when he read it.
"I'm sorry for the misunderstanding." He said with a bow.
"Oh you don't need to do that.” Rain Drop said sheepishly as he bowed. “By the way, why are all the Canterlot ponies gone?"
"They aren’t gone, they’re hiding.” He said mysteriously. “I think the princess can explain more to you then I can." They came into the castle and looked around with big eyes.
"Rain Drops, I'm glad your here." A voice sounded, the Pegasus ponies jumped in surprise. The voice giggled. "Sorry if I startled you." Rain Drop turned around to find a white alicorn walking towards them with her wings out-stretched.
"Princess..." The two Pegasus ponies said together. Rain Drop glanced at Sky Flower and decided to continue on. "Your highness, I'm honored to be here, but why is everything so... so... strange?" Rain Drop asked, she didn’t know what to think.
"I will tell you tomorrow.” Princess Celestia said, her big voice echoing around the halls. “We're waiting for one more pony to come; meanwhile I can show you where your room is. One thing that I'm sure of is that you will need help to succeed this mission. The third pony is on his way right now from Crystal Empire. But I must warn you, This mission won’t be easy, it has danger in every corner."
"Da..da..da danger?” Sky Flower stuttered. “I know I should have stayed in the clouds."
"No, Rain Drops needs you, you have to see that. When the time is right you will not be the little scared mare you are right now. All you need is friendship to show that to you." Celestia looked at Sky Flower, hoping that she would understand what is important to her and what is not. Sky Flower nodded stiffly. “Now go, rest.”
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A lot of grammatical errors, misspellings abound and Mary Sueish OCs.
An overused plot, as well.
Best idea? Rethink the plotline and get an editor.
EDIT: Also, you misspelled "Changeling" in the title. And the title is in the wrong format.
EDIT2: This also very rushed.
I have not even opened the story to the first chapter...
Either get some decent form of spell check so it is at least decent or get someone to edit your fic as you write.
OKey okey okey. I know I have some wrongs in it. But English is my scond language. and I don't know how to fix an editer. And I know this chaper is short but I was writing on my phone. And the next chapter is much more longer. I promes
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Try clicking the button that looks like ">>" in the upper right corner of a comment. It lets you know that you've responded.
Look here: For Editors.
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Thanks for the link. I'm cheaking it right now. And I hope my stories will get better in the future
4691897 It's not Changling it Changeling
4692093 Thanks, did not notice that
4692093 nice profile pic you got there
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Thanks
4692747 It's odd, I've ad this same profile picture for years, and not one person ever commented on it, but the moment I joined this website, about 1 and a half years ago, people started commenting on it, is it because it's a car in a sea of ponies and therefore it sticks out? Or is it something else? Whatever, thanks for the complement!
4694404 not sure either, but it's nice to see something different once in a while
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I was trying to find something different. But it fit so good to the story
If you want I cam help you with format on your story. I noticed its written just running and no format along the story. Nevertheless, nice story. If you want a proofreader I can help you as well
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I would love to. Thank you so so much
4744573 No problem =D