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The Psychopath


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This story is a sequel to Chest pains


(The pic is from Samaru163)

(This is a full successor to Chest pains)

The white changeling, despite being a creature hellbent on erasing existence, has created a hive of its own by morphing ponies that pass by it, and by subjugating lone changelings wandering about haphazardly. However, after seeing a blurred picture of Chrysalis within the hooves of some captured explorers, its chest has begun to hurt it tremendously.

Needing to learn about what this sensation is, the creature has left its hive in the large forest to find the fabled alicorn of love: Cadance, determined to have her teach it "emotions", before these "things" destroy it from the inside.

Then again, how is a changeling supposed to learn about emotions, let alone one created without them to begin with. What is going to happen to the denizens of Canterlot while Celestia and her sister are gone, and the only to watch a being capable of erasing you from existance in one fell swoop are but a handfull of ponies, including a young alicorn and her husband?

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 30 )

2425738 Crap. I had a hunch that that was the problem. I wasn't sure, though.

YO PSYCO. YOUR FUCKIN STORY IS SENDING ME NOIFICATIONS EVERY MINUTE.:ajbemused:

Either something's up with this site or this is a sign.:trixieshiftright:

A king of the shape-shifter that is completely white?
Oh, the situation is promising, the fact that want to study in order to understand the emotions he feels when he sees the Queen Chrysalis.
I think he's trying something like love or pity, but I especially love!
However, now faces Shing think it will last less than a miracle.

2429487 It's the site. I'm also getting a permanent notification.

2429499 *gasp* A comment from someone other than Samaru?

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Bene bene un capitolo veramente interessante!
Comunque il re dei mutaforme quando confessa il suo amore per la regina è incredibilmente realistico.
Il suo potere poi immenso e credo proprio che potrebbe portare Equestria come doono di Nozze.

2461012 I almost understood what you wrote, despite not speaking Italian. Something about the changeling declaring its love for Chrysalis or something like that?

2461083ùùYes, I'm sorry but I dont speak English.

2461150 What are you typing here? And if you didn't, how did you read this?

So it is either love or hate that this white changeling have toward Chrysalis.

2471552 SOMEONE ELSE COMMENTED ON THIS?! I'm feeling inspiration to please the readers again!:rainbowkiss:

2473343 But they don't know that. That's what the ponies understand of it.

2474553 Adjusting to simple minds is a chore.

"No. Pure logic and analysis."

She's no robot! :rainbowlaugh:

2523911 Another rare comment! I must note this down.

Funny the situation, the two lovers that they forgot the king's castle in this shape-shifting and also the hole in the floor that did, however, the king shapeshifter sometimes seems to be a robot without feelings but seeks to learn are our main currioso of see how everyone will react to know that Cadenze has a student and he is a shapeshifter king, the king nis pity though that has yet to be revealed as king and has also revealed what he ordered his subjects.

2525168 He actually "phases" through solid objects by modifying his molecules to move at high speeds. This prevents them from hitting the molecules of a certain solid object, and makes it seem like he's a ghost.

2595956 Yeah. I never really pay attention to my little guys anymore. I don't even mention the Ivamora!:applecry:

im forward to this i want more please:raritystarry: NOW!!!:flutterrage:

2713293 Don't worry. I'll make more. I just have IRL priorities to attend to. Curse you REAL LIFE! *shakes fist*

don't worry take all the time you need man:twilightsmile: im writing a story called The pony scrolls 5: equestria.

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