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Valtyra


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Several centuries have passed since the elements and various technological breakthroughs have made space travel no longer a dream.

The first proper ship; the HMS Twilight is to be launched with Celestia as the first royal passenger.

What will her adventures bring? Contact with aliens... Maybe! Thrills... Most certainly! Excitement... Definitely!

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 8 )

So Twilight died of old age, or what happened? Will it be explained.:rainbowhuh:

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Patience, reader. All will be explained soon enough.

Interesting. So far, you've held my intrest, but I do wish the chapters were a little longer. However, what you have is fine.

Props to you on making a entertaining little story. :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::raritywink:

Wow nice introduction to what seems to be a great story! Looks like I'm not going to bed any time soon. Great job

How could spike hate what basically is his mom? Is it because of something that happened to Twilight?

Great job on this chapter but are the elements are on the ship? Leaving Eqwestria without its main defence weapon?

Oh no.... SUPER SUN GOD ZOMBIE PONY PRINCESES!!!!! Great job

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Yeah, I usually write the chapters before bed so I'm tired. I'll try and improve upon the length for the later chapters.


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I would be guessing there wouldn't be any more Element bearers and even if there were, the elements were summoned in the second episode. The elements would telport off the ship if they were, but i see your point. I'll adress that later on.

Also, things happened which would be spoilers : D

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