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Valtyra


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Celestia had a bad day and Pinkie cheered her up. Now it's Celestia's turn to take Pinkie out.

Prequel: Letting her mane down

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 18 )

Looking good so far!

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Thanks :) I've been wanting to do this for a while, but never had the time.

Already loving this FanFic :pinkiesmile: very nice start to the story!

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Yay, thanks for the comment. It brings me joy.

Turning to look at her rump, she determined it was the perfect size

:rainbowlaugh: I laughed

3723500 hmm, true I'll bare it in mind...

Great story, I would love to see it completed:pinkiesmile:

well, so far this turned out to be a pretty interestin yet, kinda short read :twilightsmile:. Kinda reminds me somewhat of A lil bakin magic :applejackunsure:; anyways can't wait to see t next chappie :pinkiesmile:

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I've found time to work on the final chapter : D expect it out in the next couple of days.

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sweeeeeeet :pinkiehappy: wait did u mean t final chappie to this fic or to t other one i mentioned earlier :rainbowhuh:?

ok, unless i'm mistaken i've just read my answer to my earlier comment :applejackunsure: n' which turn out to be a pretty d'awwww one too :pinkiehappy:. any chance for a sequel :duck:? not that really needs one in my opion but, it's up to u really :yay:

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I doubt it tbh. If anything, it would just make it worse for a sequel.

Plus I've got my hands full with my other fics and a new one-shot I'm writing.

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ooh, can u giv a hint on t one-shot :duck:? but, if not then i'll just wait n' see :scootangel:; both for t one-shot n' any updates comin up :twilightsmile:

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It's a TwiXOC fic. Mature. It's submitted, so it'll hopefully be up sometime today.

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hmm... ok, i'll check t feed after this n' see if it's up already :twilightsmile:

So that's where it ends? Seems a little. Open?
Incomplete seems unfair. I love the idea, and it's got a fair share of interesting imagery. But I can't help but feel that it needs some sort of conflict to drive it.

Atlast Celestia found someone for her.

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