Dragons are returning to Ponyville. Can Fluttershy, a young girl, really be the legendary Dovahshy?
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Rushed.
But good story, tracked.
You sir are not very smart are you. There were no alarm clocks back then!
I feel like this wouldn't be complete without a Friendship is Witchcraft reference thrown in.
It's too early in the damn morning for me to properly needle at your mistakes so just understand this: Your style isn't bad, but this needs some work.
382334there were rooster werent there?
so whats the damn diference!
Roosters cooing in the mornings don't happen all the time 382800 and alarm clocks tend to go off when you set it to go off. However 382334 you need to keep in mind that this is a FICTION so anything can happen.
butch
382432 I agree. I like the style, but it needs work.
I also agree that if feels rushed. Slow down a little.