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So Scootaloo has a problem....she has a crush on none other than Twist, she just can't see how any other pony can't learn to appreciate the lisp and the eyes, and the curly mane. Still, she has yet to reveal her feelings for her, will she do that?
Read and find out
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Can I request you do a shipfic for me?
4147592 Hum sure, although I normally work with the younger kind, fillies and colts, what's the pairing?
4147639 Actually, it is a young pairing.
It would be nice if you could do a Twistweight shipfic. 
4147680 Twist-Featherweight, right? Sure, I can do that, I already have a few short random separated scenes with feather in him, do you want it in private or do you want me to publish it?
4147694 How about public? It's always nice to take a risk.
Also yes, Twist x Featherweight.
4147707 Would you rather it be told in a third person perspective, a first person perspective from Twist or a first person perspective from Feather? I just need those details.
4147728 Third person makes me feel like I'm creepily stalking them and listening to everything their saying. Third person please.
This really was a strange shipping.
But it was a nice short read.
Just one thing:
You forget to add periods/commas at the end of dialogue.
4147875 Darn it! There's always something I miss, oh well, thank you for noticing and informing me about it!
CUTE!!
4148100 I don't know what show / movie your avatar picture is from, but I would like to know as soon as possible
4148476 It's from a show called Married With Children, which aired in the late 80's and 90's. The character in the picture is called Al Bundy.
4148522 Looks intressing, but the wikipedia article says it has 11 seasons, I JUST don't have the time to sink in a show that long, you know, exams years and all, maybe in the summer? Are the episodes 22 or 44 minutes long?
4148538 The episodes are 22 minutes. And I don't know if I'd call it interesting, but it is funny, if you like cheesy 90's sitcoms (which I do).
4148553 I do love me some 90's corny cheese, Is it "EXTREEEEEEEME" or is it more of that bad kind of trying to appeal more to adults?
4148562 Well... if by "appeal to adults" you mean it has sex jokes, then yes, but they're mostly just horrible puns and stuff like that.
4148576 Ah I see....I have a question for you, see you've been here longer than me and what's the majority of the fandom take on "Gay", no, not yuri, yaoi, pure male on male, like, I've been daydreaming about writing this pipsqueak x featherweight fanfic in which feather pretends to like girls and is always making comments to the girls such as "Oh, nice body today Dinky", but everpony knows. And sure I know everyone's gay for Braeburn and I've read some apple incest between him and Mac, but how do you think people would react? Less receptive?
4148587 Generally, a male/male fanfiction will receive a few random downvotes just from people who can't stand the thought of two stallions (or colts) falling in love, but those people are the minority. I for one like male-on-male stories.
There's a group you can join for people who specifically like to write and read male/male stories.
4148611 Won't be a few downvotes that'll stop me from writing light romance! I've had my roots in romance in yaoi, that is, male on male, and I've planning this fanfic for a few weeks now, i have yet to write it...maybe I will do it after writing the prompt given to me by Eclipse, he asked and I should give him priority after all..
Can you link me to that group please? Thank you
4148633 http://www.fimfiction.net/group/51/mm-shipping
Also, I'm gonna follow you!
4148611 Nevermind, that green really blends with the black when I'm reading and replying, I've already missed a few links today, must play closer attention, thank you
4148643 And thanks for the follow
4148654 You're welcome!
Wow
just.....wow
You might want to look into working with an editor so you can do some polishing, but it's cute and it's kind to Twist, so I added it to the Twist group and took it out of the submission folder.
4817998 Thank you for adding it to the group. This was my third or fourth story in english, which I wrote in the most simple manner I could (this was before I was confident on my abilities with the english language enough to try and write more than simple description and dialogue), after a certain moment I started getting bolder and bolder with my writing, to the point where this is (despite being only some months old) an old shame.
Stlil I'm glad you liked it!
oh dear
..
I mean I love Twist's lisp, I really do but there is a much simpler formula to writing her lisp, and it allows the reader to actually understand what you are trying to have her say.
s = th
the "s" and s sounds are what she struggles with. So if you just replace the s with or add TH you should better represent that adorable speech impediment that makes her so unique.
cute