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Zanem-Ji


Founder of "Let's Make You Known!" Group. Wazzup.

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Diagnosed and dealing with cancer for centuries, the Element of Honesty that Apple Bloom bears, can no longer put her illness on hold. She's done fighting an already lost battle, and decides to let herself slip into the arms of Death...

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Reference to an Aviators song?

4128016 There's a song? I'll have to check it out.

SCOOTALOO CAN'T PREFORM A SONIC RAINBOOM HAVE YOU SEEN HER MANE??!!!?!?! AND ALSO SHE CAN'T FLY!!!!

It came somewhat suddenly. Surely not the disease itself, but the news of it. She did not blame herself for not catching the disease earlier while it was still in the benign stages.
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really?
REALLY!!!!! :twilightangry2: :raritydespair: WHAT KIND OF A MISTAKE WAS THAT?!?!?! :flutterrage:

4243281 Alright, in response to your first comment...It's a fictional story...written by a fan. FANFICTION. For entertainment, and story writing purpose, she is able to perform a sonic rainboom. Yes, in the actual show, she cannot fly, much less perform a rainboom, but again, this is a fan written fictional story. She doesn't bear an Element of Harmony in the show either, so why didn't you say anything about that? And as for not flying...she's been alive for hundreds of years in the story, it wouldn't seem fair to NOT give her the ability to fly after all this time.

In response to your second comment, I have the tendency to make typos. That much I know, but I have reread your second comment over and over, and I'm sorry, but I don't follow you in what you're trying to point out...

4256156 I'm trying to point out BENGENIG that isn't a word, how would you make such a typo!?!?


4257619 4257619 ...I spelled it as BENIGN in the story. When it comes to cancer, it means that the tumor lacks the ability to metastasize (invade healthy tissue), and in some cases, it can become malignant (cancerous), which it does in the story. That's how it's supposed to be spelled.

4260631 ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :twilightblush: That's kinda embarrassing oops

4264193 Lol it's all good

4264681 can you check out cupcakes anyone please? :fluttershysad:

That was...nice, real nice.

LINKIN PARK LYRICS LOL

5428042 I don't remember, I think it was powerless

Comment posted by Phil Ken Sebben deleted Feb 6th, 2015

Good god, woman! Do you ever not write sad stories?

Welp, better get onto reviewing this. I'll be back in a bit!

Finished reviewing your story for the goodfic bin: for reasons best described here, I'm rejecting it from submissions folder.

5761120 Lol, I do have some comedies! But I'm not that confident in them.

5764978 Looking back at some of the stories I've checked for the bin, I'd be tempted to say they're very difficult to get right.

I think it's because humour is different when written down than when it's visual... and we're most used to visual humour, because, well, eyes and all that. I think I've lost count of all the times I've said that a joke has fallen flat due to lack of build-up.

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