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Vinyl Scratch hates school with a burning passion. The education system was one of the reasons she left and became a DJ in the first place. Now, there's one tiny little reason that makes her end up back in school, and she's just going to have to put up with it.
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Vinyl Second best unicorn!
I was not expecting this.
Short and Sweet fic, i enjoy it.
Have a up-vote ^^
5360690 Gracias, my friend! Any kind of love is appreciated! (No pun on your Chrysalis Pic. Lol)
5360725 you did it again. in other words you completely surprised me :wink:
So cute :)
5371586 I'm just as surprised that there's no down votes yet. But I remain hopeful, that I'll at least get to 50 before I get one hater.
5376316 The ONLY reason I'm going to delete your comment, is because I don't want anyone to have ANY clue on why she's going there. That also includes process of elimination of guesses. I don't want you to be offended .
5376855 Not a problem. I understand completely.
You got your fifty!
5404260 THANK YOU!!
I was not expecting that, at all.
I like it. I like it a lot.
Finished reviewing story for the library: accepting. This was just too adorable, and was done just right.
Detailed decision is here.
A more cleverly misleading title I've not seen. I'm still not quite sure what it was I just read. :)
5739988 I'm not sure if your comment's a good one or a bad one. The smiley face lures me into some kind of security, so...I'm going to say 'Thank You!'
5754791
I liked it, so you're good. :)
I think that the last two sentences should be in one paragraph, rather than split between two; it's a bit awkward to read as it currently is.
Other than that, me likey. A bit predictable, but sometimes predictable is good, especially when you want to relax and just enjoy a cute little story. And it's well written.
I have written a review of this story; it can be found here.
Is this a sequel to someone else's story, or something?
Other than that, this was a fun little read.
This was an interesting read but I love the ending. Vinyl and Tavi being the adoptive parents of Scootaloo is something I never expected. Liked and faved.
A nice story! Very relaxing to read because the pacing is quite slow. You can really make a vivid picture of the school because you engage all the senses and lots of direct and indirect thought from Vinyl and the (rather direct and cool) narrator.
I also liked the surprising fact that you made Scootaloo their adopted child; it really fits, if you ask me.
And you gave a small hint at the reason Vinyl was in school (with that Tavi quote), but still you kept it a surprise (I thought it was all just a dream
), which made the story interesting.
A small learning-point could be your spelling. Take a look at the following sentences:
She rounded a corner that led down on of the many halls throughout the school.
she loved those kinds of thing when she was say, tearing up the turn tables at a dance club,
I mean, Mother’s really sweet and all…but she’s kind of strict…”
“Yeah, but still, you’re the cool Mom.”
“Tavi just wants you to get good grades in school, that’s all.” Vinyl replied. “It’s what we both want.”
Keep on writing!
I can see where Vinyl was coming from, and I found her narration somewhat entertaining. But, I thought this story was a little bit too forward.
Usually, I like those stories too, but I feel like there isn't anything too interesting about her entering high school. That isn't to say that it isn't bad though, since that's the only major problem I had with it. 