May Flower once dreamt that a pure heart could change the world for the better. Now, she reflects on the life she lived, the beliefs she stood for, and the choices she made at the princess's side. Despite everything she's done, every step she's taken along the way, and every right answer she's ever given, her dream has failed.
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Ah, now this is a fantastic start, Plebeian. I look forward to where you will take us with this story. And knowing your writing ability, I am certain I won't be disappointed.
As it is, right now, there's not too much to talk about. You have a solid character, an intriguing premise, and have shown us a promise of exploring meaningful themes. I'm definitely looking forward to more.