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4486704 Too much?
You realize you're probably gonna get a little flak from some of the more hard core people for giving the CMC their cuttie marks right? Lucky for you, I'm not one of those guys. Over all, the setting could be worse. He could've been locked up or been kept quarantined in isolation until he was deemed safe.
Human sayings freaking the populace out... PRICELESS! As well as the two bullies getting scared close to pissing themselves, I wouldn't be surprised if there were twin trails of urine trailing those two bozos. That being said, I have to wish you a job well done.
4487438 Thank you very much. We'll be hearing more from The Gruesome Twosome, but probably after the upcoming ¤Anachronism Chapter¤. As for the intro to the CMC's cutie marks, I've been waiting since Apple Bloom was introduced to see the trio get those sigils and Season Four teased it, but never really delivered. I think I might catch more Hell from the rearrangement I did with S4. (See Author's Notes.)
4487529 Uh, you're welcome?
Just a suggestion, but if you want to put a warning in the author's note, you should probably put it at the beginning, not at the end, after its too late
4499198 You're right. Either that or not write any spoilers in the authors notes… I can never think of anything decent to say in that box. Mind you, I don't want to leave it blank; that just screams "LAZY!"
4501660 I usually use it to post the GDocs link to my story, or apologize for my updates being soo damn slow. Now if you will excuse me, I'm 3 weeks late on my current chapter, lol.
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4512515 Count yourself lucky that I didn't let Pinkie finish the song...
4512696 Nothing not nobody is more awesome than RDJ. Not even Rainbow Dash can match him... Though she reaches about .72% of his AWESOMENESS.
4512492 I call chapters like these "Anachronistic Chapters." They take place well outside of the story's normal timeline. Think of 'em as a "What If-?" filler.
4527318 Yeah, Steve is trying to find new and exciting ways to insult Twilight. She is not his favorite pony, by far.
4531268 Yeah, Biggie getting it on with the NOLA slang is lolful sauce. How did Pinkie- taste? What chu on about about, Willis?
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So does she ejaculate after or before she yells "Yeah caffeine!"? ;)
4547753 Lol!
4549281 Random much?
Their families, friends, and most of the town.
What...?
Things like that and others happen and I keep wondering if this story was somehow trying for comedy.
Also have a hard time making sense of why the heck you phonetically spell out acronyms. RD, AJ, SCC and such are best left as the letters themselves as it's highly distracting, remarkably so, to see these things used in such a way. To the point the reader has to sometimes struggle to register it properly with what it is meaning. Breaking reader immersion this severely makes a story far more difficult to sink into. Please consider simplifying this end of things. There is no purpose for the strange approach. This really needs an editing fix on this point.
Beyond that, perhaps in a fair part because of the above issues kicking my mind off the story a little each time, I have found the story to have interesting things going, although many more chapters to go for me to see how the things that have been set up play out. Due to having a hard time getting immersed, it's difficult to gauge certain aspects, but overall it's going alright. I know much has to be explained about his abilities and the Terran Empire and the rest, so I'll wait and see. Character interactions vary a little at times but seem to be working well enough. Perhaps I just need to see things growing more as the story unfolds. Back to reading.
Scootaloo wanted an awesome cutie mark and you gave her one for dancing?! You monster!
5665029 What were you expecting? Meth production?
Anyone else find the phonetic spelling of letters in abbreviations a touch annoying?
Ar Dee instead of RD.
Ess See See instead of just SCC.
See Em See instead of simply CMC.
It feels unnecessarily complicating.
5911393 I'll try to remember that for later…
Please don't use pronunciation to write acros..
Please let it be a Freudian slip...