When Sweetie Belle went with Rarity to Canterlot, she expected to die of boredom, but she find soon attracted by something that she hadn't expected and a desire that she didn't know that she had.
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Midnight Sonare
In the rays of the sun I am longing for the darkness
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Can't wait!
4097761
Me neither!
>but she find soon attracted by something
u wot m8?
“That's the same thing you said yesterday when we arrived!” It needs to be "arrived" rather than "arrive".
"One of them, a light grayish blue unicorn filly with a dark blue mane, played the violin in such a way that amazed her." There are various ways that this could be worded, but this ain't one of them.
I'm liking this quite a lot so far, and will keep an eye out for the next chapter.
4097860
Thank you. I'll fix those as soon as possible.
The "one last look" clichè gave me Ebola.
Sublime otherwise.
I liked it, nice job.
4098293
Thanks
Yup, gonna have to keep an eye on this one. I like it so far. Of course, Sweetie's my favorite of the CMC, so I might be a little biased.
4099101
Yeah, Sweetie is my favorite CMC also!
That's why I'm writing this,I made her suffer too much in my other fic. She needs a happier one.
'sniff sniff' Is that untapped potential I smell? I believe it is. This story is excellent so far and I look forward to reading more of it.
Not too often we get to see a Sweetie Belle Cutie Mark fic, everyone seems to ignore her. I look forward to seeing more
4100497
Thanks, I'm glad you like it.
4100698
Yeah, that's coming from the same person who made her cry in every single chapter in her other fic.
Yeah, is more common to see a story about Scootaloo, even Apple Bloom. Sweetie Belle needs more love.
I wonder if Vinyl and Octavia are gonna become major characters with Sweetie Belle and Rarity in this, and that said ponies will have their character tags admitted.