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Dark0592
Here lies the wistful delusions of the sleep addled mind. Actually wait, no, just me.
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looks worth a read, possible friendshipping from the summary maybe?
4088817 definitely friendshipping, possibly full on shipping. Still haven't decided yet, this is literally just an original story concept I pulled from a dream over a year ago lol
4088899
Well as always we look forward to thy storie and any you may rewrite or update
4088899
Also the whole VinylxTwilight ship if done right is fascinating so why not try?
4088921 I like the pairing I started it in scarlet high, but that was a focal point of the plot for Scarlet High. This one I plan to make the pairing, if I decide to make it closer than flirty friends, much more gradual and thought out.
4089250
Well I guess we shall have to wait and see
definitely going to be watching this. seems a little fast to me, but that might honestly just be me. and luna's being annoying, and vinyl is the adult between the two.
Reminds me of the RPG shadow run on steroids
Keep up the good work
What brought me to this story is the cover art; good choice! It's the cover art that most people look at first
Also, it's one of my favorite pieces by spittfireart on DeviantArt (I'm a huge fan of her!)
I look forward to reading this! I'm sure it's awesome!!
gahhhh need more sooo interesting
4089891 well I'm still figuring out the story as I'm going, considering it's a concept from a dream lol. It is a bit fast, and my starts seem to tend to be a little fast, hopefully I get a nice pace going before I lose the drive for it
Man. I'ma read this straight-away.
You just can't keep to just one project at a time can you?
4091711 not really, it's rare for me to hold the drive for one story for longer than a couple days, and this is a concept i've had for over a year
Awesome
faved
Is Twilight OP here? Because I get the feeling that Twilight is OP here. Twilight being OP is good in my books always. ALWAYS.
4092292 I dunno, let's find out
Small error:
just don't try getting into locked rooms
One question though, what exactly are they?
There not ponies, they have hands.
They are not anthropomorphic, unless you forgot the tag.
Are they Humans with "Pony" personalities?
4093135 what do you mean with "pony" personalities? There is a human tag... one would assume that means they're human...
4093477 What i meant was if they still had the same personalities as there pony counterparts.
That brings up a second question, if they are not anthropomorphic, how do they do magic?
4094119 you're obviously new to me and my stories. MLP didnt invent magic, friend. They can use magic the same way unicorns use magic, just without the focus of a horn or a wand. I normally use glyphs, but they didn't quite fit into this story. And the general personalities yes, but there are obviously going to be major differences between the characters in the show and the characters in this story, seeing as the show isn't a cyberpunk dystopian universe and this one is
4094185 Ahh i see. I am indeed new to your stories. Sorry about that
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I get carried away when something is done or show but not explained. ( it didn't occur to me that you might have already explained it in your other stories).
4094242 well it's not even in my other stories, magic doesn't always need to be channeled through a focus or catalyst. It depends on the universe and whoever created that universe. I haven't even really shown any magic in this fic yet. Hopefully you're enjoying it, though, because I sure am
ANOTHER CHAPTER!
I love this but I can see why it's not super popular. The grammar is a bit of. As is the pacing, a small bit.
4098442 honestly that has nothing to do with the popularity. If I wanted to write a popular story I'd either write a porno or a joke story, or a story that's so generic and simple everybody loves it for some reason.
but I'm glad you love it :3
4098540 Not what I meant. I meant that stories like this, if executed close to perfectly could become popular.
4098555 you mistake the way popularity works on this site lol. This story has a somewhat vague and intricate storyline and an almost unheard of concept, at least in terms of stories you see on here. that formulates into most people overlooking it because they don't think it's good before they even finish reading the description.
yet a story like the sun and her little sparkle, which has an incredibly simple plotline and more slipups with grammar and pacing, was incredibly popular and successful- even though it was only meant to have two chapters.
Long story short, most people don't like to think when they read.
it's fine though, I write because I enjoy it, popularity is more random and unwarranted than anything else on this site. You either learn to not care or learn to abuse it
4098631 Okay, I see. Maybe that's just how I work.
4098631 Never kill this story. If you do, I will hunt you down and kill you.
4098726 good luck with that lol.
and I don't kill my stories, I lose the drive for them.I want to finish every one of my stories, excluding the first few, and if I can't then I have a rewrite planned. The only time I cancel a story is if I write another story that is of the same idea
4098982 Good. I like you too much to want to kill you.
again well done
reminds me of shadowrun
but 20% cooler x 50000
4099123 I know absolutely nothing about shadowrun lol, the only thing that this was influenced by at all is ghost in the shell and only vaguely
Now that i think about it , I can see the similarities between those two as well
Well keep up the good work
You have me hooked. Need more.
So... they have weaponized Tron Lightcycles now???? Sweet. I can't wait to see what other action Twilight and Vinyl get up to, but I can totally see them staying up all night playing video games until Celestia yanks the plug on the game console.
would you happen to be accepting OCs into this universe? I could think of at least one of mine that would give the Seekers something to think about
4119900 lol, I hadn't even thought of the lightcycles. I wish I was a half decent artist so I could give you guys visuals and illustrations of these things I think up, but even if I could half of this stuff I wouldn't be able to. I leave a lot of stuff up to imagination intentionally, and sometimes I just can't think of an exact mentalization of how the things look- which is the main reason why description isn't my strongest suit
4120440 Adding more characters, especially if they're not mine or that I find on my own time and understand just as well as mine, will just add a layer of complexity and difficulty into it that would probably make me not want to write the parts involving them, so I don't really bother.
If I want OCs I ask in the AN or a blog
4120896 would this be an accurate representation? (of course with the canopy)
img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20080623190505/cnc/images/2/28/CNCTW_Attack_Bike.gif
4120919 not really. They're more like the light cycle, but it's cyberpunk not just cyber so they're not as pristine and smooth and everything. Imagine their basic design but give them a look that would make you think it'd be used in a movie or a video game involving mechs, give them a cockpit that has one-way technology on it, give it the mounted machine guns facing forward and the cannons extend from the front around where the windshield would be, but 122m cannons are huge, and these ones fire the equivalent of high explosive armor piercing, or HEAT depending on context, so the energy coils needed to power such a powerful shot are pretty huge too- and the barrel needs to be long enough to give it enough velocity to gain the armor piercing penetration. They're not mortars though, they face forward with a decent degree of gun traverse.
If I were her I would IMMEDIATELY go to my family.
Who's going to stop me?
4129237 And first
Nice job!
Keep up the good work
4129237 Well, she doesn't want the Seekers to realize they could get to her through her family, plus how do you show up on the doorstep and say, "I'm alive!" without everyone freaking out???? I'd have the Chasers set up a meeting in a protected environment saying they have some information about DJ Scratch and set up the reunion that way.
4129875 A good idea, but I would act impulsively and I figured she would too, given the circumstances.
4129875 You're looking way way way too far into this mate. overcomplicating something that can be very simple. I don't think you quite understand the universe, Chasers are a privately funded and privately run unofficial faction, and Seekers are more or less technologically obsessed revolutionists who forgo morales to make way for progress. The Chasers wouldn't set up a secret meeting for Vinyl and her Family because there would be no point and it would be a waste of resources. And the Seekers aren't some omnipresent force that knows and sees all, even if they had reason to use Vinyl's family against her they wouldn't know it was them unless they sent a Seeker to follow her- which since it's her and Twilight the thing would be found out and destroyed before it gets any information.
4129894 let's just say I already had half of the next chapter typed up by the time I had a chance to upload this one
4130248 Okay. I love you, man.
And good show.