Reggie Kush is a simple lower middle class pony. He works at a fast food restaurant, has classes to worry about, and lives in a house with over 8 roommates. So why wouldn't he get stoned all the time?
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This is great man! I love the theme of the story, the character, and the fact that this story features everyones favorite past time.... KUSH! Just one problem though. If Reggie smoked that bong at the very beginning of the story, and is feeling the vibe (his eyes were red), then you should have put more detail into his drug-induced perception. Like for example, when he was walking to his room, comment on how he feels like he's floating through space. I came here to read about a stoner pony; and I almost forgot that he was a stoner after he hit that bong until the ponies busted in his room.
But other than that one thing, you got something good going on here. Please continue to work on this for the sake of stoners everywhere.
Oh and p. s. you should totally have Reggie get into trouble with a mexican cartel, like Pineapple Express
This is a good start! I can see this going somewhere. I think that you should continue through the day of Reggie Kush, while still developing the characters some more. I think it should evolve into all of his housemates smoking with him, and Sugarberry is the last one he convinces to try it. Is this version of equestria supposed to be like the real world? Or is it like the show version of equestria?
4077957 Actually it is a little bit more like real life, but most of the show elements are the same. Let's not forget that this fic is mostly going to feature background ponies. Whereas main characters will be featured somewhat like guest stars.
At first I was worried that you were going to just jump into a sesh with all of them and leave it at that. But I like the way that you backtracked. Can't wait until the next chapter, I want to hear how Sugarberry got into it. Is she a closet smoker? Is she just curious? Or is she really Reggie's evil half sister and plans on smoking all of his weed and taking over the world?
You should continue to have Reggie learn the four virtues and the 20 rules of thumb. http://www.reddit.com/r/trees/comments/202chx/a_stoner_reveals_the_420_code_7
Reggie should learn how to be a better pony and make friends. It seems to me that Reggie may have a special talent for marijuana, but he doesn't fully understand how to utilize it in a social way. He definitely needs to learn rule 11 "share your trees". I hope this helps give you more ideas!