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I wish!!

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Daniel and Drew have always been good friends. Through thick and thin they stuck together like family, true bros. Now as they suddenly awake in Equestria in the form of foals their friendship will be put to the test, not that it'd probably waver. Sure they were small- but hey, they had magic!

Rated T for language!

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Comments ( 216 )

I want more from this. PLEASE!!! :pinkiehappy:

lets hope they don't give it away!

Well, better Pinkie Pie then The Cakes. Not that anypony will understand what you're trying to say. :rainbowlaugh:

This should be fun, except for the fact that you'll be stuck in, well you know, diapers. :eeyup:

Okay, I had more on my plate to figure out. I swear, this better not end up like the last time. I'd never live that down.

... last time?

4030685 It's a "Noodle Incident". Odds are we'll never hear about it.

Something's not right with your download links. Both text and html try to download a "download_chapter.php" or "download_story.php". Oddly, the epub download link names the story correctly. I've seen this problem crop up a few times on various stories, but I have no idea what causes it.

I look forward to seeing more of this story, though! It's a good if sudden start. :pinkiehappy:

When is he gonna realize he's a girl?

4031182 Hopefully before he gets his first diaper change.

Quick lay back down and pretend your asleep! Don't worry Pinkie's isn't that smart she'll fall for it!

SHIT IT'S THE COPS, RUN!!!

4031182 After his high on telekinetic overwhelming power is over and he has to use the bathroom Lol that is when it will hit him/her like a truck xD

carry on my little psychotic bastard babies:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

i need more of this now

4031213 It's only Pinkie Pie. And she's seen this sort of thing before.

4031234 Yeah, if nothing else he'll notice the lack of a certain 'part' and put two and two together.

4030576 What do you mean? They seem exactly like the two foals...

This story needs an editor. If I find time, I can give it a quickie.

4031626 All i can say about that is Pinkie and the Brain to some extent and we don't need nostalgia to know that show was hilarious even if it was dumb to some extent x3

MOAR:flutterrage: if that is okau withn yoused :fluttershysad:

Which then got caught everything, of course.Nothing in the room was safe

*Missing a space.

Good job guys. Less than ten minutes in, and you've already set fire to Sugarcube Corner.

Not even the real Pound and Pumpkin Cake were this destructive.

Interesting. I do hope they settle down. The a gain, pinkie might make them unwilling, while willing to settle. Guess we'll all jut have to wait and see.

Personally, I hope they get their act together. You're in the bodies on the cake's twins, guys. Show some respect...

Wait, if they're in the twins' bodies... Does that meant he twins are in their bodies? Oh, is won't end well

4032203 Plus the other ponies can't understand 'cause they're foals

4031819

I mean revealing that they are humans

Heh, another amusing chapter. One suggestion, pull back on the references, or make them more subtle.

Lol, this is funny.
Imagine that the foals go to whoever made Pinkie Pie sad and made them pay, that would be awesome.

4034067 ...That would be mildly amusing...especially with all the powers of ... MAGIC! ...at their disposal.

4034113 Or drowned in water, laser-beam canons of air, and possibly being hit upside the head with earth. There are a lot of things you can do with that particular branch of magic...and most of them involve either architectural changes or hitting somebody.

4034153 ...Is Pumpkin Cake the Avatar? ...Mastery of any magical field tends to take several years...physical magic even more so.

Congratulations, you finally figured out that you're not a dude. :eeyup:

4034167
But she's a baby unicorn with untold magical potential and awesomeness.
So logic is clearly thrown out the window here.

Here I am, thinking I'd just be posting one chapter and leaving it there. I thank you all for the support! :pinkiecrazy:

Hehe this is interesting and amusing :pinkiesmile:

4034237 The odd thing is that the level of control displayed here shouldn't be possible. No foals outside of those two have even exhibited such magnitudes of magical skill. It was even explained in the show as 'surges'. So how this is currently working should not be.

4034489
Pinkie is spiking their bottles with magic.

4034272 Give me and Blue-boy over here a couple days...
4034237 And we'll get your story even more popular.

...I hope you don't mind Samaru being here.

Love the humor with this story. Poor guy isn't in the best situation right now :rainbowlaugh:

4034498
What do you mean by getting the story even more popular?

I wonder how Pinkie will react when they know words foals shouldn't :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::moustache:

4034493 Great idea...
4034556 Possibly in the feature box? It's possible. Just send to random contacts.

4034638
Hm... Possibly, but I don't exactly know very many people on FimFiction.
Though at the rate this story is going it'll probably get there in no time.

a moment of silence for the recently departed Daniel Jr

hopefully pumpkin will realize that he/she is powerful enough to cast a gender switch spell very soon:pinkiesmile:

4034922 Given that Trixie, with the alicorn amulet, was unable to do one I'm not sure our newly female friend will be able to either.

Wow, I really thank all of you for giving me the confidence boost I needed to continue this story! I'll be actively trying to keep this updated and have longer chapters! And as for all explanations, they will all be had in the future! Once again, thanks for the heart warming support! :pinkiehappy:

Also, I'll be looking for editors! (I reached 100 likes! Yay! :yay: )

4034596 Depends on what Pinkie Pie understands.

I.................
this story..................
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This is really good.:pinkiecrazy:

other then spelling error and basically grammar. I would recommend you indent your paragraphs.

Not sure I like that pinkie's sad. Did she have something to do with why those guys ended up in pound and pumpkin's bodies and that's why she's sad?:fluttercry:

I do like that the guys realized they shouldn't cause problems for pinkie:eeyup:

Look forward to the next chapter:twilightsmile:

Was I part of some bad fanfiction?

What is the meaning of life?

When do we go home?

Who dropped the soap?- Err, I mean who brought us here?

WAS I PART OF SOME BAD FANFICTION!?

Lol, I laughed so much at that :rainbowlaugh:

life is a bad fanfic . also is mr. cake dead? it would explain the sadness:pinkiegasp:

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