"Commonly; I don't really mind ponies. They're cute. However, becoming one wasn't exactly what I had in mind."
L dies, then comes back as a pony after making a deal with Death.
Or he hoped it was Death.
The cover isn't mine, I just had an idea from it and wrote this one shot!
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I up-voted it, but I can understand why others might down-vote it;
It starts off like a full story but it's a one-shot, so it gives a cheated vibe to the reader when they finish.
5554851 I've marked it as a one shot because I really just wanted to get the idea out. There are two different ones I want to do. Right now I'm just making sure it's out of my head just in case I want to add more.
lots of promise.
are you taking idea's by any chance?
i.e the "Undertaker" (who might actually be death) from The black water Gospel (warning, its dark and violent) takes a vacation in equestria or something.
Great start. I look forward to what else you can do with the concept :-) (Maud Pie VS L, taking all bets).
L is so awesome from dearh note i cant believe they havent done a crossover wth him.
5555817 my bets on L he has better character then maud. Sorry maud lovers
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You should totally do more of this, it seems so rare to see good cross-overs.
i love L he so coote!!!! instant like and follower!
I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
5560807 I second this! More chapters please!
5555050 Hey! Hey!
Yeah it's me! GOP!
I'm here to tell you that I'll sue the fuck out of you if this doesn't have a sequel!
It's just that awesome!
Thanks!(Finally came up with a threat that doesn't deteriorate the writer's chances of writing!)
GET WORKING ON THE SEQUEL PLEASE!
5555050 Yup, definitely needs an update! Or a sequel!
more....
God, I really liked the story, this has a lot of potential!
PS: I can't stop imagining L in a conversation with Discord, and L, obviously, destroying him
More please
Yes more! This is looking good so far and I want to see how this turns out!
5555050 IT CHANGED FROM COMPLETE TO INCOMPLETE! DOES THIS MEAN THAT IT IS GOING TO BE UPDATED MORE OFTEN!?
5647565 Let us all hope so. This concept is simply to amusing to ignore.
5708811 INDEED!
What's with the random present tense?
apparently abnormal, apathetic, alliterative, amusing pony.
I want more of this, that is all I have to say
There needs to be more of this! You must continue!
I don't really intend on updating this story anytime soon, so I decided to write this mini preview of the next chapter!
I love the concept but I'm going to have to downvote this because your grammar is such a mess that it kept derailing my attempts to read this.
For example, "I was interrupted from my reading by a friend of mines to come and inquire your likes and dislikes."
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