Button's Mom tells Button to go out for Hearts and Hooves Day while she's out with her husband. Button goes to SugarCube Corner for a smoothie, and well the story goes from there.
(For give me for the horrible description, but I was never really good at this anyways. I just wrote something for Valentine's Day and thought of letting you guys should have a read at it <:) )
So do expect alot of things, randomness to be exact. Knowing me as I do I don't think I did a good job. So read at your discretion. I had fun writing it so I don't know tell me you think :3
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I think it's just too short. For a romance I don't feel like we got enough interaction between Sweetie Belle and Button. If this had been the first chapter of a longer story I would have said it holds a lot of promise, but on its own it feels lacking.
Still it's not bad and I welcome anything in the ButtonBelle shipping.
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Good concept, but not enough story or sweetie x button interaction for me to believe its a romance, plus Mr. Cake is OOC. Being a father he would so concern for button, even though he is not Mr. Cakes son, he wouldn't kick them out.
Interesting. I am assuming that the game catching on fire is a reference to the Pilot Episode by Jan Animations.
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I liked this story, but there wasn't much interaction between Sweetie Belle and Button. If I was a first time reader and unaware, I probably would have thought that Button hated Sweetie Belle and the romance was elsewhere.
Hope I did not come off as rude, just trying to be constructive.
4011097 Oh no, not at all. Thank you for commenting.
Well this made my day indeed, nothing like reading a good story and drinking some white chocolate coca at night. You my friend have earned a like and save
4107134 Why thank you very much friend <:D
4107202 hehe no problem, if you ever need someone to talk to on spare time. My Skype username is kyuubiXX
Huh can you get chocolate smoothies?
Hahahah I laugh so hard at this story!
What the hell was that ending
This was a nice read.
love and lost progress!
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