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Fluttershy awakes one day to find she is married to Rainbow Dash, she also finds she has a daughter and a son. Fluttershy must find out what happened, but when she finds out, will it change her life forever?

Edited by: RaylanKrios

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 88 )

This looks like it's going to be a good story,I'll keep my eye on it:twilightsmile:

I like this so far.
Some of your sentences are missing words, though... But I really like this so far.

The story is good, but for Celestia's sake, get an editor.

mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooa:scootangel::applecry::moustache:r

4174568 There is so male in the relationship, that's all explained in the next chapter

Comment posted by AdventurePone deleted Apr 4th, 2014

People seem to like your story, well we can't have that so I'm going to thumbs it down just because. Sorry bro, but I don't make the rules.:ajsmug:

Comment posted by AdventurePone deleted Apr 6th, 2014

4188779 :fluttercry: It was a joke dude Durant is my brother and I was just pointing fun @ him I didn't actually thumbs it down.:pinkiesad2:

4188771 Dude, seriously, how old are you??

So Fluttershy is in the future due to an spell Twilight had cast? I had originally thought that Fluttershy was in a parallel universe.
Now, I'm confused. Why were Twilight and Spike confused?
And finally, seriously, get and editor.

It's an easy solution Fluttershy. Just say you have amnesia.

Comment posted by AdventurePone deleted Apr 8th, 2014

4198002 You commented so i guess you did that a comment

WHEN U SAY NEW CHAPTER BY FRIDAY I THINK U MEAN THAT FRIDAY

Whoa flutters I think twi knows about this right?about the reason she in a 'dream'?:fluttercry::fluttercry:

It's been good and entertaining but it's struggling from why isn't Fluttershy mentioning that she can't remember anything to anyone? The longer things drag out the more bizarre her reluctance to speak becomes.

“You have been acting weird all morning. First you act like you don't even like me, then you slam your head on the desk, and lastly, you just lied to your own son.” Rainbow answered angrily.

Umm... Shouldn't that be our son instead of your son?
Normally I don't care about these things but this time it really bugged me.





AND NOW WE RUN!!!

4274877 Personal I think it works either way, but I do think "our" makes more sense than "your".

Wait... So is it a dream or not!?!?

ITS ACTUAL HAPPENDING!?!?!!?!?!?thjs is why I buking hate twilight Aghhhh god why?:fluttercry::fluttercry:

YEA TWIS A FUCKING BITCH GREAT FRIEND FOR NOT TELLING FLUTTERSHY ANYTHING OF THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm really confused.

Love it so far. Just wish Luna's part would have been longer.

Idk what's going on now...

You know, normally I would complain that the new chapter took too long or didn't live up to the wait in substance, but you know what!!!




It was a'ight.

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