Rarity has had feelings Fluttershy for a long time and decides that she needs to tell her, but she can't seem to find the right words. So what happens when she decides to confess everything after a spa visit.
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Could use some cleaning up, I spotted a few missing words in there. Nice story though!
Why so much hate? It needs a good edit but it's fine despite the grammar flaws. Bet it was some miffed shippers, sad about their OTP not being there.
Maybe not a sequel just the AppleDash side story kinda interested.
(not that my rating means anything 
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Good story excellent pacing and good dialog as well as a well written story. 9/10
How heart warming
The spelling and grammar ruined it for me to be honest...
Sorry
You get into the zone reading and visualising, then boom a word is missing or is in the wrong tense. Please proof read and edit this.