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Scootaloo and Twilight travel across Equestria in search of Scootaloo's mother. They travel to different places and meet different ponies who will each bring them one step closer to answering Scootaloo's question: "Have you seen my Mommy?"
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I'm sorry but the title of the fic made me think of this:
3994888 I was gonna post that dammit
best two parter
best doctor
best companion
3994888 GG. You got me there.
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Are you my mommy? Mommy!
nobody else notice they never got their meals?
4014996 Oh... Oops!
4038153 ha ha ha!
hope to read this soon
The description and some other clues basically made me think 'X is Scootaloo's mom', dood.
While it is kinda obvious, I'm not saying who out of respect for the author trying to keep it a mystery, dood.
4236386 Let's see if I can change you you think it might be.
4236525 It would be interesting, dood. Just try not to change it too drastically that it ruins the story, dood. Just because one guy thinks he knows what's going on, doesn't mean he KNOWS what it is, dood.
4236536 You don't have to worry about that. I haz a planz.
I see Shining Armor has been taking lessons from Trollestia. I can't wait to see more of the search for Scotaloo's mother goes.
When is the next part comming out im dying to read it cuz its just so INTERESTING!!!!!!
Another story that is very intresting but will never be finished!
4701896 Just so you know, I am currently working on the next chapter. I am just a busy man with a lot of emotional/stressful/econimical stuff going on. Be patiant please.
But twenty-five minus seven equals eighteen, not sixteen.
4903170 You forget the 11 months of pregnancy and the 11 months (roughly) from her birthday. Her birth day is in June. Mother's day is in May. Mares are pregnant for 11 months and his birthday could be at a later month like October.
Math... It's my best subject.
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Ahhh, okay. I did forget that her birthday was coming up soon. And I know that mares are pregnant for eleven months, but I believe that you mentioned her being pregnant of nine months in the opening flashback.
I think scootaloos mom is fluttershy just a guess
4903225 ...Even so. It still equals out
4903230 You may be right... but then again, you may be wrong.
4903237 I probably am wrong about it being Fluttershy but who else could it be hmm cause scoots is a Pegasus through and through plus rainbow knows who she is so that's hinting at something
Ms Foster isn't especially bright, is she?
4903293 Foreshadowing?... Or me being a little
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4903306 Are you starting the Sin Counter for "Everything wrong with Have you seen my Mommy?"?
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Someone write a one shot about the pony named Scold.
Well I thank you for this update, I much appreciate it!
You may be busy but I hope for updates. .. don't stress to hard though...
Keep up the great work!
Calling it right now: Rainbow Dash is Scoots mother. It was practically confirmed in this chapter. So, does that mean Twilight and Scoots are on a wild goose chase through the country, only to ultimately end up in Ponyville again?
4904623 All I'm gonna say is really think about all the facts that happen in this story and think again because you MIGHT be wrong.
I love Twilight using Princess Priviliges, we need to see more of that. I can't wait to see who Scootaloo's mom is, but PP seems like a decent guy and if he helped bust a bunch of filly abusers I suggest Twilight quietly start the paperwork to get him a medal or something.
She is Lunas daughter, that's where my money is.
1. This story will never be done now that the author is in college.
2. We all know that Twilight is her mom.
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1. You are probably correct.
2. Nuh uh! It's Rainbow Dash!
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Ahem! Brain here, the literal Brain of operations here (My owner gave me the most original name ever!). My physical counter-part was about to release a "large serving of" spoil
ers and so I incapacitated his free will and temporarily took over to prevent that from happening. I am also please to say that the next chapter has finally... been started. I apologize for my owner's procrastination abilities. He tends to be very lazy but I am pushing him to write out the next chapter. We are sorry for the long wait and we will try to get the chapter out as soon as possible. Brian out!
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HOORAY! THE STORY ISN'T DEAD!
5590501 Far from it!
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I'm excited to see what comes next, as well as ecstatic to know that the story isn't dead! The reason that I thought that it was, as it hasn't been that long that this has gone without being updated, (at least, compared to some of the other stories that I've seen on this site, anyways) is because of a comment on it. Hooray for people being proven wrong!
5591042 Forget about what comes next-becuase this story will never be finished.
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HAVE YOU NOT BEEN PAYING ATTENTION TO THE AUTHOR'S COMMENTS? YOU SHOULD BE!
5643539 Actually, after I upload the next chapter (Which I am proud to say that it is completely finished and ready to upload. ...and is also probably the best thing I have written, EVER!) there will only be about two or three more chapters. I'm sorry about such the long wait but my procrastination level is so over 9.000 (<--Decimals!) that it takes me quite a while to finish these.
...Also, I'm a gamer so there's that. (which adds to my procrastination level by 8,992
Math!) But at least I'm trying! So give me some credit... please... ...Maybe? ...I'll go sit in the corner...
5644370 YES I DID PAY ATTENTION TO THE COMMENTS SH*T FOR BRAINS!! HE SAID THAT HE WAS STARTING COLLEGE-WHEN YOU START COLLEGE YOU KISS YOUR LIFE GOODBYE!!! YOU SHOULD MAYBE PAY ATTENTION TO THE COMMENTS INSTEAD OF PROVING HOW BIG AN @$$HOLE YOU CAN BE!!!
5653603 It doesn't mean I can't try. Plus, I actually work more then I go to college which I only one class for. Also, the delay for this story is mainly due to my mad procrastination skillz. ...sorry...
I saw the new chapter and was excited for it!
I do enjoy this story but that might be because it's not the kind of story I usually read.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, though it's kinda sad to know there is only 2-3 chapters remaining... oh well, every story must come to an end!
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Hey you! Yeah you! New chapter! NEW CHAPTER!
4903231 Two things:
1 - Did the math and that checks out. Absolutely love problem solving. Math is there anything I don't enjoy about it.
2 - I bloody love this story mate. Can't wait to see more of this.
P.S. Don't get confused with my lingo. I still have no idea what is wrong with me yet bro. Goodness gracious what is wrong with my head today...oh yeah. Lack of sleep.
YES
GIVE US A SEQUEL!
Rainbow has some explaining to do. And Fluttershy better hit her with THE STARE when she learns about what Rainbow did. Now the major question is was Picture Perfect Scootaloo's dad or some other pony???
Yes I want a sequel! yes I knew who it was!
the big difference between what you wrote and what I thought would happen is...
I assumed Twilight and Scootaloo would grow closs in the process of looking for her mother, possibly give up, and Twilight would just adopt Scoots in the end. Scoots would be happy because she would have the only mother she needs.
That is honestly (more or less) how I thought your story was going to go when I first started to read it all the time ago. That's OK though, I still love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter and sequel.... so get to it!
5984682 it's already stated 100% that he is the father...