Twilight has been invited to the archaeological discovery of the century, a door older than Equestria itself. A door which hides an ancient weapon of 'peace'. Her curious mind may lead her to bite off more than she can chew.
Meanwhile a certain apple farmer struggles with her words, and a revelation, to admit her love for a librarian, and accept her fully. No matter what.
Below the surface, an ancient past, long forgotten by even the great sisters, stirs. And it has found it's new Authority.
Chapters (17)
Intriguing
"He had always wanted to read more, but there never had never seemed to be time. Yet he knew that was not true - there was always time. One simply had to make time, and there was always a lot a soul did that was trifling and altogether unimportant."
- Louis L'Amour "Fallon"
wow this looks really good so far! hope you have the next parts already worked out cuz i dont like waiting long..... sorry....lol
here's me eagerly waiting for more! 
oh and " ,running a hood through his frazzled grey mane and taking a sip of his drink." i think you meant hoof not hood
ps: twijack is best ship.... halfway threw i forgot that this may be a twijack but thats a good thing if you keep up the amazing story and the possiblyity of twijack
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Thanks! and I have a plan, sorta. Kinda. So if we're lucky i might get some more done soon. Cheers for spotting that correction by the by.
Also, Spolier: Twilight will be wearing her stetson.
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ok now i really cant wait for more of this!
Looks like Guilty Spark got a fantasy makeover.
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Last time, you asked me, if it was my choice, would I do it? Having had considerable time to ponder your query, my answer has not changed. There is no choice. We must create the Twilicorn.
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HA!
ok.... i really dont want to wait for the next chapter! but 1 thing "Twilight backed into a corned as the orb moved over the manticore," did you mean to put corned? lol
keep up the amazing work!!! 
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Curse my inability to avoid spelling errors. Thanks for pointing that out!
oh crap...
..Wait did the machine just kill Twilight to form a new brain?
"I've seen a look in dogs' eyes, a quickly vanishing look of amazed contempt, and I am convinced that basically dogs think ponies are nuts." -
John Steinbeck
Looks interesting.
Favorite'd.
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Not quite
Gah! I hate it when I find a new story that looks cool and I have to read it right away. Why couldn't I have found it six months to a year from now when there would be more to read?
Need more!
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I'll just have to try and keep a good pace with releasing chapters.
Thanks for saying my story looks cool!
and do a little 'researchin' afore a write the thing out.” i think its "afore i write the thing out"?
.... plz keep this story coming!
and "the farm pony rose, stretching out before moving to he door and bidding" moving to the door
and WOW i can not form words for how much excitement/fear i have for this story!
im afraid for twi.... i can almost feel the pain right at the end
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To do list:
1)Learn to spell.
2)Write more.
Thanks for pointing those out!
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im no grammar expert but if i see anything ill let you know
and your realy good at this! my heart is still racing from that last part with twi... man i cant wait for more
im literally on the edge of my seat!
........Twilight's going to wake up either part mechanical or fully mechanical, isn't she?
Reeeeeeeeeeeally hoping not.
Well...twi's friends are dicks
2508341 ........Seconded.
It's the wedding all over again. 
Called it about the mechanical bit, even though I hoped to all hell that I was wrong.
2508341 2508491 Thirded... I mean really how do you think she feels, you jackasses?
O_o
"she raised her forehooves her her face slowly" forehooves to her face... right?
thats the only thing i saw....
loving this and it hurts my heart to see them act like that.... so many feels for Twi right now....
well before i draw myself conclusions i think ill read the next one
PS: i would have collapsed right there in that dark doorway and cried my eyes out hoping that they would not freak the hell out when they saw me....
ok so i learned nothing from this one..... so i will just have to draw my own conclusions...for now ......
plz let them realize what they did to her, and know how much she needs them....
cant stand waiting for next part ... why must i be so impatient with this.... argh!
Well, that was disturbing
.....wow.....
......ok..... its official.... this story does not update enough O_o .....
at this point you might want to add a Dark tag to this story....just fyi....
this was sad.... but it really got the point across that the Salt units are not good guy's... all i can think is "where are they from, how is Celestia involved, and how will Twilight react to Celestia now that she is right outside her door?" and much, much more!
PLZ keep up this amazing work! i really want to read more!
why does this story have so few view's? its too good not to have more!
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Thanks for the praise!
Thanks, I try.
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Muahaha.
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i forgot "How will Celestia react to Twilights new.... upgrades?" that is the #1 question running threw my head right now... can not wait
They (Twilight's friends) seriously think a half-hearted apology like that is enough after what they did.....? AGAIN, I might add! (The last time being the Royal Wedding) dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_shock.png
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its funny cause AJ is the only one that says Sorry in that episode and she is the only one to truly say sorry here
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I'd say it warrants at least a "Woopsie doodle".
This is what happens when you ignore the little voices in your head
.............Well shit.
whelp i think she can be let off the hook... what with her having to deal with the Trauma and what not....
and poor poor Tia not even knowing why she feels guilty...
and i dont think this updates enough... but i think that about all amazing stories...
keep up the amazing work.... but i cant wait for the next part!
The pacing is a little fast, I agree. I'll keep going and see what happens.
This bodes ill.... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_rainbowderp_flip.png
It's a good thing they aren't fighting these things at their best. I seriously doubt that spell would work even if Twilight could find a source of fresh blood.
I'd say write faster but since I haven't written anything in years I'd be a hypocrite.
Unit 002? I just hope the Angels aren't far behind...
Hopefully the Shell units aren't Evangelions...
Twilight: "I've got pain inhibitors? Let's just shut those off..."
Yeah, real intelligent there twilight. Anyway, great update, looking forward to the next one!
When Twilight figures this out, shit's gonna get real.... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
WOOHOO! UPDATES!
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Yay!
Unless you are saying that there is another ending, it is must to have a tragedy tag for this fiction. I don't like being lured into something where I can enjoy a good ending but end up getting all depressed with bad endings. Even if the alternate ending is just a spin-off, there should be a tragedy tag.
I thoroughly enjoyed the fiction so far.
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There be three endings, each word at the end of 9 was a hyperlink. (Or you could use the 9-E ones from the main story area).
And thanks! Glad ya enjoyed my demented ramblings.
So no matter the ending they are all to die, Not much of a choice then. Was a good read just the ending seemed a bit meh
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I wouldn't say that. Two of the endings definitely but, one of them has at the very least the possibility of fighting back.
After all, Twilight still has the bunker, which has been fixing itself.
But then again, I am terrible. Thanks for reading!