A Hard Day's Work

Rarity and Applejack have been together for some time and enjoyed many memories together. One day after an exhausting work at Carousel Boutique, Rarity decides to head over to Sweet Apple Acres to spend some time with her special somepony. But with such a vast number or acres to search on SAA, it proves more difficult for Rarity to find AJ than she thought.

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pendrake72

pendrake72 #1 · Feb 15th, 2014 · · ·

@Phoenix Warlord...

Just a friendly point-out & correction... It is Applejack (one word), not Apple Jack (two words, & overly sugary cereal ), as opposed to AJ's little sister Apple Bloom (two words).

Phoenix Warlord

Phoenix Warlord #2 · Feb 16th, 2014 · · ·

3950357 Oh okay, I'll make note of that. I get it confused sometimes. Thanks for the call out. /)

Prose Inkwell

Prose Inkwell #3 · Feb 25th, 2014 · · ·

Nice story! However, I think you made the moral of the story a bit blunt in the last few paragraphs, and there were a few times where Rarity's dialogue seemed a bit out of character. Other than that, really nice, so perhaps a second chapter is required? I'd love to read it if that were the case!

Phoenix Warlord

Phoenix Warlord #4 · Feb 25th, 2014 · · ·

4000628 I see. I hadn't thought about a second chapter, but I'll look into the possibility. I probably forgot to say that this was one of my first MLP fics I wrote after I became a brony. Still, I"m happy you enjoyed and thanks for the comment!