• Member Since 31st Aug, 2013
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CaleMcManus21


A twenty-one year old American male who became a brony and is too scared to admit it

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While taking a normal stroll through her home in Canterlot, Princess Cadance finds an unusual creature not native to Equestria. She decides to keep him and raise him as her own, forming a bond with a son she never had.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 26 )

Cute. You should remove all that white space at the bottom

3910959 *shrugs* go to the bottom of the chapter and delete

Is there going to be a sequel?

i like it wish i could see cadances reaction

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We'll see what other readers think. If they want a sequel, I'll make one.

what?
so rushed, and why does 'your' type of celestia always try to send them away.
and a lot of spelling issues.
this could have been an muti chapter story.

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Yeah... I have issues in terms of writing one shots.

I always think readers would get bored with long one shot stories so I didn't want that to happen. That's why the story was rushed.

:heart: Loved it.

simply beautiful

Right in the feels.

Make a sequal

You left me speechless and in tears my friend, tears of warmth and love. :heart: Beautiful story.:twilightsmile:

Comment posted by N Harmonia Greatfield deleted Feb 8th, 2014

SEQUEL PLEASE, YOU KNOW THIS IS A CLIFFHANGER.

More please. By the way love it:heart:

This was sweet. Though I felt it was a bit too rushed. I would've liked to read about Roy growing up. Jumping from baby to elven years seemed a little off for me:applejackunsure:

Sorry. I really do like this though. Please don't block me for not being 100 percent satisfied:fluttercry:

Sweet little story you got here.

3911271 I think the fans have spoken! EVERYPONY!:pinkiehappy: SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!

ROY'S OUR BOY! ROY'S OUR BOY!

You guys want a sequel?

You got it! :twilightsmile:

Very rushed, but somewhat enjoyable.

This was very rushed and has quite a few spelling errors. The story line isn't very enjoyable for me and the plot is very cliche. I can't finish, but I will leave a like for the effort. Sorry I couldn't enjoy this.

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