A twenty-one year old American male who became a brony and is too scared to admit it
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Cute. You should remove all that white space at the bottom
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How?
3910959 *shrugs* go to the bottom of the chapter and delete
Is there going to be a sequel?
i like it wish i could see cadances reaction
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We'll see what other readers think. If they want a sequel, I'll make one.
what?
so rushed, and why does 'your' type of celestia always try to send them away.
and a lot of spelling issues.
this could have been an muti chapter story.
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Yeah... I have issues in terms of writing one shots.
I always think readers would get bored with long one shot stories so I didn't want that to happen. That's why the story was rushed.
very nice
Loved it.
simply beautiful
Right in the feels.
Make a sequal
You left me speechless and in tears my friend, tears of warmth and love. Beautiful story.
SEQUEL PLEASE, YOU KNOW THIS IS A CLIFFHANGER.
More please. By the way love it
We need a sequel.
This was sweet. Though I felt it was a bit too rushed. I would've liked to read about Roy growing up. Jumping from baby to elven years seemed a little off for me
Sorry. I really do like this though. Please don't block me for not being 100 percent satisfied
Sweet little story you got here.
3911271 I think the fans have spoken! EVERYPONY! SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!
ROY'S OUR BOY! ROY'S OUR BOY!
You guys want a sequel?
You got it!
Very rushed, but somewhat enjoyable.
This was very rushed and has quite a few spelling errors. The story line isn't very enjoyable for me and the plot is very cliche. I can't finish, but I will leave a like for the effort. Sorry I couldn't enjoy this.