My Foal is now 15 years old. His parents raised him well, he knows the inhabitants of his hometown of the Crystal Empire, and even all of Equestria. But when his life is threatened, the only way to save their son, is to get rid of him.
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CaleMcManus21
A twenty-one year old American male who became a brony and is too scared to admit it
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This reminds me of one of those movies that was decent the first time, and then the creator wants more from it, and they make a sequel.
Yeah... Sorry if it's starting to turn out like that... I mean I'm careful when it comes to ideas, but it's putting it together that's troublesome. I mean, practice makes perfect, right?
this is freaking awesome.
this turning out better than i hoped
FUCKING AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep up the good work man, the writing is getting better
The only thing that sucks is his name
I'm not too good when it comes to naming. Right now I'm thinking of having his name changed later in the series. So I'm sorry that you're going to have to deal with his poorly given name for the time being. Not trying to be mean.
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he has another name than My Foal? If you do change it, try something thats human and pony related, like...Jack (Apple Jack) Caleb (something random I thought of) etc
3160479 That's the thing... I'm planning to keep My Foal as his Equestrian name. But some time in this series, his human name will be revealed.
Wanna help me out on naming? I'll credit you and anyone else for helping with suggesting names.
More details will follow in an author's note in Welcome to Ponyville, My Foal, Chapter 3.
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sure I'll help! when do you want me to help?
3160542 When you read Welcome to Ponyville, My Foal (wait for the arrival of Chapter 3 though, I'm still working in it) Chapter 3 will have details about some problems I have regarding this series as well as what happens to the user when his/her suggestion gets picked in the Author's note.
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okay. did not see that coming. who's the face?
hey, don't diss yourself, I'm liking this. true, it would have been nice if we'd seen Foalie growing up, but i suppose you can have done that in the later chapters of Welcome to Ponyville, My Foal, so on that mater, I'll hold judgement for now.
4021884 I agree with Scoots over here don't diss yourself
WHERE IS THE REST OF THE STORY. Like come on, isn't there a sequel or something?