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All You Are Going to Want to Do Is Get Back There

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Diamond Tiara and Spike has been friends for the last couple of months. And Spike develops feelings for the filly. But doesn't want to admit it. He got letter from somepony that told him to go to the bridge. And something happens after that.

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There aren't enough stories on these two. Great job!

I've recently have become interested in SpikeSpoon and DiamondSpike so seeing one of these is a nice change of pace.

Subtle, Sweet, and to the point....................
Im cool with it,
:twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

3867287 know any good ones? This peaked my interest.

That's it! I'm gonna post my story on this Site! DiamondSpike will be noticed! The cuteness is overwhelming!

3867728 A few but you must know there are very small in number.

SpikeSpoon: Scales and Silver-complete/ Spike's Crazy Crush- incomplete/ Silver Scales of Love-incomplete

DiamondSpike: All That Glitters-incomplete/ Dark Seduction: part of a harem-incomplete

3867234 Thanks! Glad that you enjoy it. And I agree with you, there should be more shipping of these two.


3867728 There's this one, but it's still incomplete.

I'm normally not a fan of Spike being ship with a filly. But i rather pick Diamond Tiara over Sweetie Belle any day. Anyway this is a cute story i give it a nice 7.6/10. Keep up the good work :twilightsmile:

Wow three of my favorite authors commented here. But ah ain't sayin who :3
And I too believe these ships should have far more stories, not have stories that get put on hiatus, and should have stories that aren't only one shots. Now, I'm an artist, not an author. But you guys~ can make this happen.

3868189

I didn't know that Dark Seduction was eventually implying a DiamondSpike, for the longest part there's a SweetieSpike, and definitely a SpikeChystalis, and potentially a oldie-but-goodie: SpikeDancer (Spike X Moondancer, which is basically more canon than Sparity it looks like)

3868725 Me too but when I went to Spike's Many Shippings group it was under DiamondSpike.:applejackunsure:

3868694

Doesn't matter if you wanna make it anonymous---I have a pretty good idea what two of them are:pinkiecrazy:

Don't worry: I'm a huge fan of them, too :pinkiehappy:

In the end, Spike and Diamond had to clean up the entire library, all by themself. They didn't want to see Twilight on fire again, so they did what they had to do. They talked a lot while cleaning the library. Talked about Twilight, how Spike got here, Diamond's future, Silver Spoon, Canterlot, and the CMC. Spike didn't really agree what she said about the CMC, but he also didn't want to get her to get mad. That was the time they became friends.

Celestia dangit. Great premise, short and cute. But that is easily 2k at least of buildup, character interaction right there. The start alone would of made for another 1k-2k.

This is such a tease of one of my favorite DT ships. These two just work together. Attitude wise. I mean, it would likely not go far since most childhood crushes never last. But darn if it isn't the one with the most potential for awesome.

Good job.

EDIT: Stuff turned out to be mainly word choice and few typos like "meet" instead of "met" and something else. I'd say this story is worth fleshing out. You could easily squeeze out a chapter with each of those first two paragraphs.

I love this ship, and I like the idea of this story... But it needs a lot of work and editing I couldn't even get a third of the way into it before the awkwardness of the dialogue and writing made me want to stop.

Remember: A good editor and prereader will make a story better. :twilightsmile:

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