Diamond Tiara is feeling luck out in love and Spike wish to keep the void in his heart. Twilight is planning a singles' night to get all those singles in town in one room and become a matchmaker, despite Spike's discontent.
Will Diamond and Spike get along and hope to obtain what they long for?
And would a certain fashion unicorn come between them?
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I really like the idea behind this story. I love unusual Spike ships and I write quite a few of them myself. However, the writing style definitely needs some help. There are a lot of grammar errors and some sentences barely make sense.
If you ever want any help, drop me a PM and I'll give you some tips.
I don't think I've read a ship fic with these two. So far you are off to a good start.
Pretty ironic that Twilight set this up since she can't land a stallion or mare.
You should do more Diamond x Spike fics.
Nice to see this continuing.
I don’t remember her being so metal in the show...
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Opps, my bad. That's awkward.
'Cannonball'? Already on a petname basis aren't we?
I like where this is going, gonna keep an eye on this
Once again, Twilynanas just couldn't back off.
Maybe have Spike and Navy interact and push their issues on one another. Navy maybe doesn’t have a good idea of love and gives Spike bad romantic advice but as Spike learns better, Navy realizes he doesn’t really know how to be a loving husband despite doing everything he thought being one entailed. just some ideas. Feel free to use or completely disregard as you see fit.
He's in an affair.
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Thanks for the feedback. Next chapter I did planned to have Spike meet with Navy but didn't know how to go about it.
If you put things into your story and don't know what to do with them, then why put them in anyway?
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I was overly ambitious to write some grand tale involving multiple characters. Writing by the seat of my pants and here I am with Chapter 7 in sorta limbo. I wanted Silver and Navy's rocky relationships in parallel w/ Spike and Diamond's own relationship problems. But the solutions and how all this come together is just not coming to me.
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So far I haven't seen any relationship problems with Spike and Diamond. (Though they aren't technically in one yet)
Do you know any relationships, fictional or otherwise, that have had been through what Silver and Nova have? Would experience help?
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When I talked about spike and tiara's relationship problems, I meant individually. Trying to get their act together before committing to each other. As of now, could be more than friends.
Fictional or otherwise, there's nothing similar to what I'm writing regarding Silver and her husband. If I search up the internet, I might find something.
Experience might've help, but I believe you can write about anything if you put some thought and sprinkle some imagination into it.
Yeah, I completely understand that feeling of spicing things up and don't have a clue on how to make it work. I can only hope you'll find an answer to this. The ship still needs to sail