Applejack and Rainbow Dash had been married for a decade. Rainbow Dash being a Wonderbolt occupied most of her time. On the other side, Applejack’s life had been mainly static; wake up, eat breakfast with the family, work on the farm, then Rainbow Dash comes home, eat dinner, then bed. Rinse and repeat. Applejack felt something missing in her life. A child of her own.
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Alright, a nice little gem I found. Now, I'm no good at finding grammer and such, but I have to say the characters feel natural, like how Applebloom talks, it sounds like how her character would of talk on the show, same for Applejack and Rainbow Dash. Which is very good!~
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One little complaint, the ending felted a little to fast. I'm stuck thinking who they will adopt and such, and how they will handle have a foal.
(Maybe for another story?~
Anyways, I loved it. That's what I'm saying!~
May your stories be good, your views high, and dislikes low.
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Sorry. I forgot to publish chapter 4, the last chapter.
Thank you for compliment.
Ah, there's the happy ending I was looking for!~
A great ending to a great story!
So cute!