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metroid_freak


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There are few situations more frustrating than when a carefully-laid plan doesn't go the way one expects or wants it to. But just because a plan goes wrong doesn't mean that everything won't turn out right.

My first attempt at MLP shipping using actual characters from the show. Please enjoy.

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Comments ( 14 )

A story with 2 of my favorite background ponies? You deserve a follow with that fave.

Well I loved it good job ^-^ i d love to see more.

Holy originality, Batman! This shipping's a faver!

veeeeerrrrrry interesting. Personally, I would have liked for this to be drawn out over several chapters, but this is a very flavorful and satisfying one-shot.

And I cannot believe I am saying this, as OctaScratch is my favorite ship, and you sunk it. But dammit man, you made me believe.


p.s. incriminating Rarity? oohhh my you are clever.

This was fantastic! I just wish it could have been a little bit longer. Kudos to you sir! :eeyup:

:flutterrage: < RARITY!

You knew that Fancypants was married!

I would like to start this comment by saying "Great job! I absolutely loved it!"

I noticed a few tiny errors and thought I'd point them out for you.

but the DJ reigned in

"reigned" should be "reined"

She smiled widely as the raving revelers

Is that supposed to be 'at the raving revelers'?

I though that’s what you were going for.

"thought"

who not had paid

"who not only had paid" perhaps?

They fell to the grass and laid beside each other, staring up at the night sky.

"laid" should be "lay"

I shall now conclude this comment with a like, a fave, and a request for a sequel.

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Thanks! I'll attend to them right away.

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Fixed the errors. You were a lifesaver!

And thus, a new ship set sail into the horizon!

Nopony deserves to get cheated on.

Murderers, do! My mother did!

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