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Before he left, Spike make a horrible mistake. He told all of his friends that he would leave Ponyville to cleanse the demon within him and to make amends for the suffering he brought. All of his friends didn't want him to leave, but he made up his mind. He said farewell to his saddened friends and painfully walked away from what he called "home". He told himself to venture of to the "Cavern of Greed". There, he can fight the demon from within...
5 years after the incident and all is peaceful in the town called Ponyville. Not a frown to be seen; not a cry to be heard. All was calm till a mysterious cloaked stranger came to the peaceful town. All the noise; all the chattering ceased. The stranger walked until he was in the middle of the town and simply said, "I'm home".
(Each chapter will be someone else's POV. The story progresses as the chapters go on. Also, come to this blog. I'd like to ask a question.)
Editor: LightningBass94. I can't thank enough without him(her) because my english is somewhat bad….
Wow great start.
not bad but we need something to go off of here maby a prolge or a nightmare as he gose to town or why he is constalt cursing Luna
Who's the ship ? Also anthro or not ?
A Spike adventure pic expect me to find this oh man!
We request that thou shalt make more chapters!
interesting, lets see where you run with it
Q: whats the ship? here is hoping its Splight or Spike/Harem
Good job, you have me on the hook already. Can't wait for your next chapter and see where this is going. I would love to see all the ponies interested in the bad-ass that we all "know" Spike will become. I would love to see tho that he still isn't "completely" head over heels for Rarity. It would be interesting to see that now he had some time apart and have grown up that he start to see the charm of the other girls around him.
Anyway keep up the good work will be waiting to read more from you.
I like these kind of stories. Let's see how this goes.
P.S. "Ponyville" has 2 "L's" not 1.
3800774 No arthro.
3801467 Shh! No spoilers!! XD
3801486 I will hint that throughout the story, shit happends. Keep watch to find out. ^~^
3801268 This... I SHALL!!
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good start, though there are a few errors you might want to fix up.
Interesting description i will check this
You have an amazing story. Its awesome how you described the way the blade looked and how it was for him to forge it. Although the chapter could have been a little longer, not like its a bad thing.
I cannot wait to see whose view is next and what might happen in the story.
Do what must be done.
~Rokkurin
Interesting, this shall be under my watch list.
I demand more. NOW. please.
3803560 I'm working on it as we speak. Don't chu worry, don't chu worry now~!
Please get to the next chapter soon! The wait is killing me! I want to see their faces when Spike reveals himself! I bet it will be awesome!
3804060 It hasn't even past chapter 5 yet.
Don't fret yet. I will satisfy your desires. 
3804060 And I just realized that I liked by a well-known author. Because of that, I have been re-motivated to make Chapter 2. Will come out today.
Though it'll be late at night...
3804162 WAIT! WHAT NOW? What well-known author?
3804175 Because I say so.
3804179 I meant, what well-known author changed your mind? Who is this person we must thank for next chapter coming out early?
3804193 B25. He's also a friend of mine.
Badass. That is all.
3804500 Why thank you sir.
3804519 Uh… Thanks?
Hah, five years without seeing his friends? I had his friends watch him burst into flames and 'die' and he doesn't see them for fifteen years. I'm evil.
3804602
I think I might have my second motivation.
3804602 Also, I've read your "Legacy of Spike" or something like that. When he was with Gilda, I practically died laughing.
olny thing i think is wierd is Rainbow dash saying mister what is this a 60 sitcom
3804696 I couldn't think of anything to say for Spike. I thought of "stranger", but that sounds like something AJ would say.
3804713 mabey bub
Keep 'em coming! These are so good mate, I love this story so far!
you have peaked my curiosity stranger, do go on.
MOAR!
hmm, this so far is a interestin read n' i can't wait to see t mane 6's reaction
. Althou i gotta say what spike came with for his alias was weak at least to me that is 
; i mean yes i know u put that done n' everythin but, come on spike, u could hav done better 
3804847 What about buddy?
3806345 This sounds better. Thanks
HOLY FUCK I'M SPIKE AND I'M MYSTERIOUS!
That's how it feels
Once again you made it interesting and at the same time made me sad it is already over and i have to wait again lol. I think it would be funny if Spike started to kick himself over the persona he just made. I hope the next one he meet is Applejack. Like save a filly from a run a away applecart. outrun dash, and save her with great strength while being kind. That would impress then both. Making AJ redder then a stop sign and Dash pop a wing boner lol. Keep up the good work can't wait for the next one.
3806371
What;s with Spike and his alias ? Why can't he declare that he,SPike has return home ?
Write more!
3806604
IDEAS!!!!
3806616 JUST DID!!!!!
3806609 He wanted to hide his identity until the time is right.
This was a good chapter as well. Always love to see Twi confused lol. I cant wait to see how this plays out. I am thinking Diamond Dogs took Shy when she was trying to help some animal with AJ. Then Spike save the day by beating up the dogs, but also protecting one of their puppies. That is how you hook AJ and Shy on Spike and all of his dragon greatness. But cant wait to see how much Shy is going to freak over a dragon saving her lol. I smell a faint in the air. Keep up the great work I have something else to look forward to on the weekend now. (not that i wouldn't mind if you put them out more then that lol)