le-*GASP! Man, you are brutal with these cliffhangers.

Can't wait to see what you do next Vinyl!

Epilogue has been lengthened. My apologies I forgot to put something in. Lengthier monologue weeee!

4354866 Re-read. I extended it a bit. Found an old notepad document I had written near the beginning including parts I wanted to add to it.

You dirty bas- no, that's not me. Damn you for that cliffhanger mate. It was unexpected and well played. You, have now made my afternoon due to that cliffhanger, thank you. You better hurry up with that sequel. Till then!

~OreoKookie

....holy fuck......

Okay, so the Scoota-ship fic takes place after this, Cecil's alive in it, Chrysalis seems wonder around ponyville in disguise for shits and giggles and there's a lot that makes no sense.
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I am most assuredly VERY interested.

Well well well this was a great ending to this arc of the story. I can honestly say I love the story. I do patiently await the next arc to your story. Keep up the good work

4356424 What doesn't make sense?

4356424 The Scoots story was planned to run parallel to this story but yeah, after.

4357228 You failed at paralellicism the moment you included Sam at Twilight's.

4357267 Yes

You killed off Cecil???
WHY???

4420405 I guess you'll have to read Tongue Tied to find out!

4420405 thanks for the spoiler

4517519 Do you read the comments before you read the chapter? If so, it's your own fault. Comments ALWAYS contain spoilers unless the author wants and/or states otherwise.

4517670 it was right there as i looking at the chapters.

4517678 How? The first thing you should see when you look at the chapter is the chapter. You have to scroll down pass the chapter in order to see the comments. And as you are looking at the chapters, the comments should start at number 1. Unless you have your settings set otherwise (which I didn't think possible.)

4517707 easy, i am reading on my phone. Scolling down isn't an exact science

4420405 sh!t

Stay tuned for the next installment of (whatever the series is called)

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Take your pick.

4575986 Well you'll like this story and the sequel

4578739 black book

4578739 I think he's just joking lol

4518246 And now Pinxel Pan

4685358 who?

4686299 Never mind...

4420407 HOW COULD YOU, YOU BASTARD!?!?! I'LL KILL YOU, YOU SICK FUCK!! I'm going to make a special batch of cupcakes. The special ingredient? Its you, of course!

4756812 i just read the first two paragraphs of Tongue Tied, and even so, I still want Pinkie to make cupcakes out of you, you sick bastard

4907765 Easy killer.

Just realized a pardox; if at the end of the last story, it said One year later, HOW could Cecil die before Fluttershy gave birth?
Answer me that, and in the words of my 6th-grade math teacher:
"You can getchaself a cookie when you get home." -Mr. Baker
-DTOTW
edit: just read chapter of Tounge-Tied. Nevermind this entire comment

well that ending....sequel?......sequel. well that was awesome can't wait for more. also f****ing hate cliffhangersi492.photobucket.com/albums/rr289/axlthehedgehog_2008/responses/cannot%20contain.gif

as for the story i492.photobucket.com/albums/rr289/axlthehedgehog_2008/responses/beautitfully%20sad.gif

stay classy

GOD DAMNIT this story is so good keep er goin like a detotated wamborgini wearin a beanie in itz new bikini drinkin a dry martini and eatin some pasta linguini!!!!!!!!!
EVEN THOUGH CARS CANT DO THAT SHIT!!!!!!!
Aka good story lookin forward 2 da sequel!

At least everyone was happy in the end.

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7318781 gib me moaaaar