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I still think the primary alicorns should be twice the size of normal ponies like they are in the show.
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That would make them 10 feet tall
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And? In the show Celestia is very nearly twice the size of a normal mare. I have always been fond of the "behemoths that shift the heavens" anthro theory because it maintains the scale established in the show.
But meh, that's just my weird head cannon and the story is good and the charts are much appreciated, they really help me imagine what's going on.
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I'm editing the story a bit for it won't be the normal cliche of being friends admittedly. I'm going to have him meet a Ranger soon and I am making Romanov a Hanza sniper instead of a Ranger. Mix it up a bit.
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Go ahead and read the edited Prologue
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Quite a few spelling errors. Other than that it sounds good.
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I have always sucked at spelling
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If you throw it up on a google doc and add me I can go through it if you would like.
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I prefer to do my work alone but thanks for the offer.
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No problem. Good luck on your next chapters. I look forward to what hijinks our hero is going to get into.
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The CMC.
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So there is going to be tree sap in his filters by the end of the day?
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lel
You know you could have killed yourself = "Знаете, вы могли бы так себя убить"
Greetings = "Приветсвую"
That moment people dislike your stories even though you corrected your mistakes...
I guess Romanov 1 in Polis just disappeared, and was replaced with the Hanza one.
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Yea, I decided that another faction needed to be in the spot light so I gave it to Hanza
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Also note that Hanza isn't apart of the Fourth Riech
3765966 And what mistakes did you correct? Poor spelling, annoying walls of text, plot that has been done a quadrillion times..
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Sorry... I'm going to send Romanov into the Everfree soon anyway.
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And the "annoying walls of text" are inspired by the way the actual Metro 2033 book was written. . . and was a best seller.
3766288 It looks better on a book, pal.
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Well, it isn't your story.
DAYUM. Badass moments to the max.
I feel bad for poor
FutashyFluttershy.3767712
If I could make a video on this it make it cooler.
3767815 Yeah, it would make it cooler. But when you said Fluttershy was wearing a green hoodie... Lets just say my fiance was pissed that I spat some flem into a trashcan from laughing so hard.
Once you go Futashy, she'll stick ya in the back.
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Actually... In ever saw that one coming
I didn't even know who Futashy was until I "accidentally" came across it.
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Oh My Celestia! That happened to me too... Okay, I lied. I seen a few NSFW Blog on here with Futashy on it and I was totally confused... and aroused.
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First I was like:
Then I was like:
3768249 The I was like:
*Fapfapfapfapfapfap*
HOLY SHIT!!! This guy is MASSIVE!! I mean I'm 6' 3" and I have to duck in a lot of places and typically knock my head getting in and out of cars. What does this poor schmuck go through?
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Just going to leave that here. Hope it brought others as much enjoyment as it just brought me.
Put quotation mark when someone is talking. Just saying.
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I am really liking this story!
And if you need any help at all, I'm right here.
Dat Description grammatical error.
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I could care less if this story doesn't have that much detail in it, I still like it.
" It doesn't help when your the only one of your race on this planet! Or am I?"
His only race on the planet what? Or who?
"Your" is an indication of ownership. "You're" is "you are". So "your" in this context is incorrect; or very awkward.
Very interesting chapter, I did not see that last part coming but great job on the story so far, and keep it up.
I would like my OC to be in your story.
Badass rife man. We made one of those Ballistic Gel dummies and put bones and stuff in it... Let me just say it tore the fake arm almost clean off.
I don't want to sound like that "guy," but the story moves to fast. Not saying its bad just that it moves at a rapid rate and goes from one point to another. Anyways great chapter keep publishing more, I like to see where this is going.
Romanov should kill liam and take his gun that's what i would do because this is a story about metro and has nothing to do with Liam making him a pointless character meaning he should only be used as an enemy so let's here that boom head shot as Romanov goes on a killing rampage
Spelling errors! cool story though
3781139 to ne honest this just makes it sound like tou diss
Like Liam...
If you do like Liam, then I said it SOUNDS like it.
3799881 Wow I fail at grammar.
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i do dislike him hes one of those wannabe heroes which i hate hes just to cheesy so as a viewer i am putting out that he should be killed by Romanov and that he should take his gun it would add a good spin to the story plus as the title says this is a metro last light crossover not a zombie movie crossover.
p.s nothing to do with this but your spelling
i have no words to describe how hard it was to understand next time preview what you have written before posting a commenting.