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chibiachika


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When a number of strange incidents occur around Ponyville, all signs are pointing to two ponies at the center of it all. Will the farmmare of Sweet Apple Acres and the town's fashionista ever explain why they've been spotted together in the strangest of scenarios?

Note: The Twilight Sparkle represented in chapters 2 and 4 follows the events from my other fic, Magic's Dawn. Sorry about any confusion there. Working to remedy thr issue of multiple story knowledge for future fics following that plot.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 28 )

... I'd say I saw this coming, but the pun is too obvious. *dadum-chsh*

330581 You win an internet good sir.

Alright, this was hilarious.

330640 Thank you! :pinkiehappy:

330643 Yes, yes they were. :rainbowwild:

331007 That's a silly question. What the eff *isn't* wrong with me? :pinkiecrazy:

347373 Not sure if this is what you meant, but the one bit I was a touch concerned people might be confused about with chapter 2 was Twilight being Fluttershy's daughter. It references back to another fic of mine, "Magic's Dawn." Past that, I expect general confusion for the entire story for at least one more chapter. :pinkiehappy:

347396 Ah that makes more sense lol! Suppose I'd better go read Magic's Dawn!

nice. i laughed. sweet, but dirty.

It would have been nice if we learned why Twilight was a child in the description.

390281 Sorry about that. It didn't occur to me until much later that "Hey, maybe people don't want to read fics of two different genres to get the full idea." :twilightblush: I'm trying to remedy that issue for my next one and any others I keep following that same plot though. :twilightsmile:

Though that does make sense that, at least for this fic, I should put it in the description. I'm gonna do that now.

390281
as he said already it's from another fanfic of his, go read it, the link in the description :trollestia:
347434
I love this kind of continuity between fics! I wanted to read more of what happened after your other fic, fluttermama and fillytwilight it's way too juicy :yay:

I personally loved reading two fic of totally different genres with common background:twilightsmile:
and :trollestia: trolled my poor little woona again :facehoof:

425518 Thanks! :twilightsmile: Truth be told, my original plan never had a continuity. Of course, this fic's original spot was supposed to be before the events of "Magic's Dawn." I ended up writing that one first because, while I knew which ship I wanted to do, and the title, I had no idea how to go about it. Once I wrote the other fic as well as chapter one of this one (Chapter one was originally a stand-alone!), it kinda pieced itself together.

Not to worry though, my current plans involve writing several one shots starring filly Twilight, so we'll probably see some involving her, Fluttershy, and all her other "mamas" too. :twilightsmile: Especially once I get all the major issues sitting in my Fluttershy fic sorted out. :twilightblush:

425654
looking forward to it then!
by the way, if I got things right, filly-twilight is an alicorn now right? Because it's not made clear at any point (that I can remember) in this nor in Magic's Dawn...

425665 Celestia explained in Magic's Dawn that all alicorns are raised as regular ponies and mature into their powers. Celestia was a pegasus and Luna was an earth pony. So while she's an alicorn through genetics, until she can control the powers, she's entirely unicorn. The reasons for Twilight's madness was because the "trueform" potion woke up her latent alicorn powers too early. :twilightsmile:

425759
that's it! I forgot about that part! -_-" how embarrassing :fluttershyouch:

425782 Not a problem! :twilightsmile: Actually I was thinking about it a bit after I posted, I need to go back and make sure I didn't accidentally give two different explanations (One to Twilight, one to the others.). I think I may have Twilight's version being "It would look weird for an alicorn to live among normal ponies." But I'll look into that tomorrow. :twilightblush:

I do also have a different fic that I'm planning out involving the awakening of Celestia and Luna, taking place at the first sealing of Discord (Which also expands on an idea presented early on in chapter 1 of this fic!) :twilightsmile:

That's hot. Not only that, but it was funny. Haha, internet :D

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