Taking a Second Glance

Applejack never really thought much of love until she got involved with it. And ever since then, it's been a roller coaster ride - up and down, never ending. She thinks the same way a lot of ponies do about it...

...until her older brother gives her some advice that changes it all.

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Blagdaross

Blagdaross #1 · Oct 8th, 2013 · · ·

Well that was cute. Good, quick read.

MalWinters

MalWinters #2 · Oct 8th, 2013 · · ·

Not a bad lil' SoL piece. It feels like it raises more questions than it answers, though. Like it's part of a larger piece. Then again, that's the 'slice' aspect I suppose. The final thoughts by AJ come across as a tad cryptic. I read back a bit to see if I could see what in particular she was referring to but can only assume it's more to his overall point than any one thing in particular. It's not bad or anything, but it's a bit strong on the 'Rosebud' sort of closers.

Mattricole

Mattricole #3 · Oct 8th, 2013 · · ·

As Blagdaross said, it's a nice quick read, something to enjoy when you're bored, or just looking for a good read.

Seether00

Seether00 #4 · Oct 8th, 2013 · · ·

That was nice, short, and cute.

ScatMan2001

ScatMan2001 #5 · Oct 9th, 2013 · · ·

Loved it!
It was short and had a point. Wonderful read.
I will never understand the dislikes

Jumpitydude

Jumpitydude #6 · Oct 9th, 2013 · · ·

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Either they don't like the ship, they thought it was too short, or they thought it wasn't clear.

All are valid reasons to not like, none to down-vote

It could have used a bit of explaining at the end, since it was rather abrupt (which is saying something about a fic this short, without a lot of lead up to things.), but all in all, it's a good length for a story like this. I like it.

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