This story is a sequel to Stranger Than Fan Fiction
After the events of Stranger Than Fan Fiction, a formal party is thrown in honor of Rarity's new line of dresses. All of her friends are there to support her, including Applejack.
Dash, Twilight, and Pinkie have made it their goal to try to set up the two friends as a couple. But can they get past the awkward kiss from the story?
For better or for worse, this will be the night that everything changes.
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I liked it.
It was a little rushed, and the Rarijack scene didn't have a lot of dialogue, but I thought it was good.
Don't know why there are so many dislikes.
Liked.
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Thanks for the feedback and the like!
The pacing and style may have been a little off. After all, I changed this from the fast pace of "Stranger Than Fan Fiction" to a slower, slice-of-life style. But it definitely was more developed than when it was just an epilogue. To date, this is the longest chapter/one-shot I've published.
P.S. I am also confused about the dislikes. They happened almost immediately, before I got many views, so I guess it's just people who wanted to sabotage my story's popularity.
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Its a wonder i don't have type b yet
, I love this little universe you created(there is a review on the way), makes me chuckle even when everything else today made me want to curl up in a corner(I feel a lot like aj did when leaving that party. Difference being that I ain't got no rarity here to pick me up
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Aw, I'm sorry you're having a rough day. If it helps, you made mine a little better with all the "D'aww!" reactions. I didn't know how well this would turn out, but it seems I've done better than I had expected.
I've had my Applejack moments too, usually when I feel alone. (Or when I spend all day in the darkness of my room
.) I get through them somehow. Writing and music definitely help a lot with that.
I see shipping... as well as a few d'awws...
Me likey
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I actually never thought I would write shipping, because I didn't think I could write a good couple. Now, I'm considering a sequel, since this one did fairly well. I kind of wonder what life would look like after this story. Would things change? Would they dismiss their romance as "getting carried away"?
I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
The only problem is working up the time and energy.
3096711 True, true... But think of the feels... and the awesome feeling of shipping the two best ponies
Knowing both of them, they'll both question it/deal with it one way or another. They could face embarrassment, denial, depression... and end happy of course
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I'm excited for how it could go, but I'm nervous about how good it would be. Conflict should be fairly easy to drum up, but I have to do so in an original/interesting way. That's one of the main problems, I think. Plus, I'm unsure of how it gets from conflict to resolution.
Basically, to sum it up, I've only briefly developed the storyline. At this point, it's probably my third priority, being merely a musing on what might happen.
wait ...
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That is the perfect snippet of conversation to go with that scene! That's more or less what I was getting at anyway, I was just less direct about it. Otherwise, I wouldn't have much of a story, would I? I'll be honest, that scene was completely off the top of my head, and it was probably my favorite part to write.
Don't get me wrong, the whole story was fun, but the main storyline of Applejack and Rarity required too many pauses to figure out where things were going.
3142541 I know check out my stories when I post them . I
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