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When Fluttershy doesn't return one evening, her friends go out to find her. When she shows up on Rarity's doorstep like nothing happened, a diamond hairpin catches the unicorn's attention. What has the pegasus been hiding?
This fic continues off the plot of Magic's Dawn. This story will refer to major plot elements off of that story. You may want to read it if you don't understand some things.
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wow, now I'm curious! nice kick off for a new story! there's much to be explored as the story goes
Only one complaint, not enough filly twily!!
502251 Thanks. :) You're right on the "much to be explored" bit. I've been working on this one since BEFORE "Generosity's Trust." Sure, it's picked up a couple bits thanks to additions from that story and "The Magician and the Filly" (Twilight loves her Trixie plushie. :D), but there is a lot still to do with this. Even my "fic ideas" list still has a note that says "A LOT of work to sort out."
Hope you're ready for chapter 4 in the next few days...because that's where it all starts to come together. 
As Fluttershy's daughter, I would think Twilight would get some kind of important role upcoming! :D
AAHH no flutterdash?
502911 Sorry, I already did DashiePie in an earlier fic in my stories. :( Though we do still have something interesting coming up for Dash...
its cool and i think its rainbowpie
502919 It's funny because my fic "The Party's Loyalty" is grouped into the RainbowPie group, but I think that DashiePie flows better. But I've never been one to make sense.
Cool man
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lol wut?
666775 I'm not entirely certain which part is getting that reaction.
I'm always willing to clarify or revisit something that's confusing though! 
Just let me know!
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Just the last part, came out of nowhere it seems....I may have missed something....
666872 The part where it seems like a completely different story discussing an incident with body switching? That's actually a continuation of a thing I had running in chapters 1 through 4 where it would show a present day scenario, followed by a flashback scenario (Chapter 5 missed out on this, because that one was entirely flashbacks.). It's actually a direct reference to "Magic's Dawn" if you remember the events that revealed Twilight's alicorn form.
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Ahhhhh. Ok. Thanks!
i love it
670005 Thank you!
671303 so wen u doin a new chapter
671696 I work on it when I get time. It's been a bit busy around the workplace lately so I haven't had too much time to concentrate on the fun stuff.
But I try to get them up when I can!
The shine of dawn? Yet another way to say 'Twilight Sparkle', and like all the other forms of it, I find it a bit too obvious, a bit too intrusive. Not sure how else you would go about it, but it just...never mind. Perhaps you could try a reference to something other than her halfway convenient name? References to names are always a bit too obvious.
I should put this rant in, like, every place I see this. Yeah.
2098462 Yeah, there's a few lines in this I plan to revise at some point, as well as some lines thrown around in my other fics that just bother me (I'm not particular fond of Fluttershy's first line to Dash in Chapter 5.). I just haven't had too much time to get around to tweaking it.
Please tell me there's a Sequel to this?
