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The Mane Six are transported into some of their favorite books by Discord, who has once again broken free from his stone prison. His plan for revenge will see them enact the plot, storyline, and dangers of popular books, and maybe come out with a story or two to tell in Discord's new world.

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Hmmm...Getting sucked into your favorite book? A concept I always wish happened to me! I'll definitely be watching this story.:pinkiehappy:
The only thing I'm not feeling is the Twi-cord shipping. If that's what you're doing. But hey! If you wanna, I'll watch how it turns out!

331567 Nope! Something completely different. :twilightsmile:

im gonna hypnotize you to finish that awesome story :pinkiecrazy: !
darn,i don't have a pendulum:facehoof:

Typos: sent, not send, and table, not tale.

Really good, funny, and interesting; it gets a like from me.

331738 Thank you :twilightsmile: I shall fix.
And a like, but no track? :fluttershysad: There will be the actual, you know, story still...
If you want, if that's okay with you... :fluttershyouch:

...
What's with this? All my life, I've been surrounded by terrible literature, and now that I'm here at FiMFiction, there's too much good stuff to read!

Though I did roll my eyes and groan when I saw that Rarity and Fluttershy--Rarity I can understand, but Fluttershy?--would be in a romance novel, you definitely have my attention with the concept. Eh, what the hay--I don't have a lot to do anyway. You've earned a Watch.

331948 Woot!
And don't worry, it will not be a generic romance novel- each of the books will have its own bit to say. Well, maybe the original book was bad, but when you put two Elements in a book who do not want to be there, and Discord just for fun...
:trollestia:

Put into books. I know I've seen that plotline before...
Ah here we are.
show: Challenge of the Superfriends
episode: Fairytale of Doom
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9jpn-Xavy5c (part 1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n8LMqsWKckg (part 2)

Though, with Discord doing it: no silly time limits and no tricking him into letting them out.

332128 It's been done basically everywhere, but I don't think it's been done here; also, I've never seen that show. *shrug*
Thanks for the track, though- you won't be dissapointed(I hope)!

Hmmm...sounds interesting. I shall give it a read and track my good sir. :moustache:

Interesting...very interesting.
Track!

A well written story and very intriguing so far, You defiantly have Discord down, but you could work on your Twilight a bit, other than that It looks like a great story

how do u write stories

im new here if anypony can tell me message me please :fluttershysad:



and great story :yay:

This is pretty much guaranteed to be good, so I'm tracking before I even start to read! How do ya like them apples? :ajsmug:

332513 Thank you!
332521 Hmm... okay :trixieshiftright:
332637 Thank you, and do you mean like writing a story in Microsoft Word? Or something? You can even write it on the website if you'd like, by going to the stories tab, new story, etc.
332880 Very very much. :ajsmug:
333005 I'm writing as we speak :twilightsmile:

333114 i uh no i mean write a mlpfim story on here im new here so i dont know how

OOooohhh...it's taking a Last Action hero route, like the part where Rainbow realizes she's in a book and uses book "laws" to work in her favor. Genius. :rainbowwild:

One problem: The first book in the Daring Do series was the one with the Sapphire Statue. Remember, when Twilight presented the book yo Rainbow she announced "this is the first book in the series. I own all of them."
Maybe you can claim they're in the second or third book of the series, but the title and plot of the first one have in fact been revealed in the canon.

350815 It was only natural to go that way, but I'm glad you liked it :twilightsmile:
352026 :facehoof: Thank you, fixed.

354366

You seem to have forgotten to fix it at at least one point, right after Rainbow explains how she knew which brick to push. She still says it's the first book.

354391 Crush. I forgot about that one, too. Thank you :ajsmug:
You could have a future as an editor.

354433

Thanks:pinkiehappy:. Having an English teacher for a mother has really paid off, because I'm very good at noticing those kinds of details in things that I read.

354449 Are you interested in editing stories? If you are, I don't have anyone working for me at the moment.
:twilightsheepish:

355182

Not sure if I could handle actually working as an editor, at least during the school year. It just seems like a bit more than I can handle alongside my college schedule (although I've set up a schedule for next quarter where I won't have any classes on Monday or Wednesday, and will only have one 50 minute class on Friday). Now that I think about it, I think I'll wait until a week or two into the next quarter before deciding if I think I can handle it.

355400 Coool. And I know you've written a story already, but in my experience being an editor/reviewer got me into the actual writing thing, and made me better at it than I had before. So if you edit, this story or otherwise, I can almost guarantee it will make you a better writer.

Please finnish please finnish!!!! I am loveing all this Dashie <3 :rainbowdetermined2:

Interesting... Very interesting...

*Track*

:trollestia:

363542 Don't worry, I'll be updating sometime during the week :rainbowdetermined2:
It's fun to write from her perspective anyways.
364936 Woot :ajsmug:

365212
YEAHHHHH I soooo can't wait till the update :rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

Cool can't wait for fluttershy's
Seriously twilight the guy makes it rain chocolate milk from cotton candy but he cant put you in a book?
This story is a gem! Sorry about not comenting sooner I was too into it.:yay::twilightsmile:

Lol love rainbow dash :rainbowdetermined2:

Oh, yeah, looks like everypony forgot to mention it!
At the end of "Read it and Weep," the title of the second Daring Do book is "Daring Do and the Gryphon's Goblet." Unless you plan on making this "Gryphon's Goblet" their objective, I'd recommend skipping ahead to one with no information (Like the fifth), or maybe just settle for "One of Daring Do's many adventures."

Also, I'm beginning to become sort of confused. Will the characters from the book actually appear, or are our beloved Mane Cast forced to carry out the plotline in their stead? Because, well, that would mean the romance novel is--in a nutshell--shipping...

450120 Dang it dang it dang it, I hadn't remembered that. I'll have to go change it, seeing as that is kind of a big thing there.
And yes, we will be seeing the characters from the books, don't worry. There will be one significant character missing, and by the next chapter it'll be clear who's not in the book, I think.
438468 She's always fun to write :rainbowkiss:

Woah, just woah! :rainbowderp:
Awesome chapter and I'm gland to see that you are still working on it :pinkiehappy:

517470 Thank you :twilightsmile:
And I wouldn't leave you guys hanging with a cliffhanger like that, trust me :rainbowdetermined2:

Will we be seeing Fluttershy any time soon?

517658 In the Second Book, yes. But we have to finish the first book first.

517684 Of course, not finishing the first one would be silly. I just really want to see Fluttershy, she's my favourite.:yay: Also what romance is there to be in this story?

517690
Well.... do you really want me to give it away? ( I thought it was kinda obvious anyways, but whatever)

517711 I meant will there be any more. Or is it only this pair?

517712 Well, we'll see when I actually write the next parts. I've got what's going to happen in my head, but the romance may or may not get to each of the ponies. I don't quite know if it'll all work out, but whatever seems right I suppose.

517723 It's just because I can read romance about anyone except for Fluttershy, she's my favourite and I can't read shipping about her, as for the others I don't care if they are shipped or not.:pinkiehappy:

I am officially a confused pony. In your last reply, you seemed to vastly imply that Discord's dirty develries would destroy the Doer of Dares, but this chapter didn't seem to talk about her at all. Which isn't to say it's a bad chapter, I'm saying that I think you dropped a false hint.

Other than that, a short but good chapter. Rainbow's dream sequence was interesting (If a little frustrating for implying Twilight/Rainbow), and Twilight's resourcefulness with her magic is demonstrated incredibly well.

541036 Dang it. I said 'Next Chapter' because I assumed I would finish this 'Book' by this chapter... but then I didn't. I felt like I had to get something out there, and if I wrote any more it would've come out as "aisubhuiorn asldkjcniurn" because it was 2 in the morning.
I still can't figure out how the characters in the book will react to the Mane Six, but what is clear- the main character isn't there. Daring-Do won't be appearing, but depending on when I write whatever comes next (2 AM versus a sane time) it'll make some sense.
Thanks for the positives, and aren't I just a tease? :trollestia:

Have you stumbled into a block, then? I can't blame you, it's what I do, too--if I can't write one part for the time being, I shuffle around to another.

Not bad, and it's a good thing you're taking Spike into consideration. I don't think it's very smart to leave him out of the action, like even the show producers have done most other times. The only thing I can think of is that little detail about names--canon dictates that "Big McIntosh" is the correct way to write his name.

723460 Is that really what the canon has him written as? I could take 'Cadance', but Big McIntosh is just wrong. Plus, I checked the wiki(http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Big_Macintosh), which lists him as Big Macintosh, and his nickname of Big Mac wouldn't make sense as McIntosh.
Please tell me that's not his canon name, please :fluttershyouch:
Oh, and I knew I was going to write what was going on during the mean time, but I wasn't sure when- and last night at 1 AM seemed like a perfectly reasonable time. I think it's when I do my best writing.
(And I already have maybe 2k words for the next chapter, so maybe I'll stay up all night again and finish it :pinkiecrazy:)

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