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I'll be you first comment of this story, and I have to say, before starting this, I'm already chuckling at the cover art :rainbowlaugh:

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Good. then I am glad I chose it. The other choice was a cropped (explicit) picture of Silver Spoon wearing a collar and leash, or of Silver Spoon in a Littlest Pet Shop cosplay. 3.bp.blogspot.com/-h4-NC9W8HGU/UTtZ1PKP31I/AAAAAAAAByU/THjsTwmx5c8/s1600/262213__UNOPT__safe_costume_silver-spoon_littlest-pet-shop_zoe-trent_artist-ponywise_png.png

:pinkiecrazy: I love this remake!
:pinkiehappy: You are a great person my good sir. Please keep up the epic work.

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Thank you very much.:twilightsheepish:
I enjoyed rewriting it. i had allot of fun and I am glad you loved it.:yay:

Oh god damn it, mating is a fetish of mine. Not just the act of primal sex, but also the desire to bear children. I don't know exactly why, but this is my fetish and I'm glad it's here.

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Comment posted by ServingSpoon deleted Jan 9th, 2014

It's official.

I am now actively concocting a sequel. Silver's canine adventures will continue in her "Dog Days of Ponyville: Doggie Deux Part 2

Just finished whole thing. It was alright.

Also I'm sorry but this bothers me: "Accept" means you're accepting something, like an object or a situation. "Except" means exception, like "Everyone was there, except the kid."

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3757690 Just CTRL+F on the chapters I indicate. Chapters 2, 3, 6 (having received no liquids accept what the). I'm tired right now so sorry if I missed anything.

Damn son, feels good that a sequel is coming out thanks to me. I'll keep an eye out for that if I remember.

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You know how much I loved the original. The thing is I have a feeling this might be a bit intense. You have a very... technical grasps of BDSM which means bogging down with this like "proper" D/s relations. I don't doubt you do this with all sincerity (and love for Diamond and Silver) but the subtle support for BDSM would just sour me on the whole matter, like reading Libertarian or Objectivist literature.

It's a bit more intense. Not as "ha ha, sex isn't serious, no one gets hurt" but I guess that's the point you wanted. You made it more "hardcore" in a way but I'm not sure if that was a good thing or not. For those who like seeing females severely injured and need blood in sex, it's good. But for those who like purely fantasy sex it's a jarring change.

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okay now that part I understood.

i followed all the original authors sequence of events and mentioned all changes I could recall making. I just wrote the inevitable conclusion of everything she was subjected to, by her will alone. She had a safe word. Instead she let lust and pride get her killed, or did she?

There are clues throughout out the series she may be dreaming. Whenever she hears a heart beat it's accompanied by a *BEEP.. BEEP.. BEEP*. Now this is either a residual memory from her last moments of her previous life or she is lying in a coma in her hospitable bed.

Either way a fresh start at a new and better life is what she'll get.:yay:

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Having only read a few of the chapters I missed the heartbeat portion. Honestly, I like to hope that she's alive and can have her Diamond Tiara.

I was just wondering why it had to get so "intense" and real. She was fine in the other story and that was cool. Sexy, intense, but ultimately not likely to be harmed. Just a personal preference. Lack of harm/blood is a bit more sexy to me.

Dream or reality you know me, i just want her and her ascerbic sweetheart to be together.

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When she is cuddled by Fluttershy and when she watches a trash truck backing up she hears an EKG beeping. This is in later chapters after "The Cowardly Pegaus".

I can spoil it for you in private

but whether or not she wakes up in Diamond's arms or spends the rest of her new life as Winona's mate you have my word Silver Spoon will be happy.:raritywink:

As for Diamond Tiara, if Silver Spoon did indeed die and her spirt transported to another world I like to think the CMC would put aside their differences to comfort her. She would mourn but she wouldn't be alone.

I would be more worried about Golden Spoon. Her daughter was all she had.

Sorry this sequel is getting allot bigger then I had anticipated. I have plans for Silver Spoon after being adopted by :applecry: which should be coming up after this little 2000+ chapter I am working in which :raritystarry: comes to the shelter to groom her at :yay:'s request.

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Winona's mate? Not a pleasant fate (My shipping powers are strong :rainbowkiss:)

I much prefer happiness to... well, i won't say all forms of BDSM but I find power imbalances are not conducive to general happiness.

I wouldn't mind a spoiler.

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Rape and Abuse itself are Imbalances of power.

BDSM is all about Power Exchange (another phrase for how they make love). The dom only has as much power as the submissive is willing to give up.:twistnerd:

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But Silver gives up and Diamond takes. It seems unfair. But I'm a Socialist. I say things like that at random, don't listen to me :pinkiesmile:

As long as they're happy, and not in need of therapy. I know a sub who tells me about these things and so long as they're healthy it's cool.

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Though I may have cravings for darker fantasy
Safe Sane and Consensual is a motto I firmly believe in.

Silver Spoon happily gives up her control because she loves and trusts DT. Diamond Tiara would never abuse that trust because she cares deeply for Silver.

Both play their part to pleasure the other equally.

They are lucky. i have never experienced something so deep. :pinkiesad2:

Thank you for your concern for my OTP!:pinkiehappy:

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They would be rather a mess without one another. I'm so glad you show them as a couple that can trust one another.

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Truth be told I would trade all but one of my former friends and lovers for one such as Diamond Tiara. For all her faults she is loyal to Silver Spoon and that is more then anyone has been to me in RL. :fluttershysad:

3770953 well i have no RL friends but more then I can handle on line. My Serving Spoon tumblr is 5 away from 700!:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:

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You're way up on me. I don't have many followers here. And my RL friends are out of town, either a few hours north or in other states, which really sucks. :fluttershyouch:

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I suppose it's just as well for me. I don't have allot of energy to burn hanging out with friends. Internet is pretty much the only way I can hang with my peeps. Like you. Guys and galls who give me incentive to keep writing.

that goes for all the ponies who fav like and comment on my fics
you rock man. whoohoo :yay:

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I so glad to know folks like you, who actually care about characters who are usually relegated to the category of "Designated Murder Victim."

YOU rock. :yay:woohoo

So a little and quick question, have you had a pre-reader to look over this chapter? Because it is littered with rather many punctuation mistakes and some clunky capital letters as well.

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to be honest I didn't write the whole thing but I have gone over it several times and been happy with the quality. I'm not a perfect writer and neither was the original writer.

*ahem* Winona is a female dog. In fact, she and Opal are the only ones of the Mane 6's pets that are female.

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of for the love of Luna!:facehoof:

ALTERNATE UNIVERSE people and ponies!:twilightangry2:

Winona is a MALE in this universe. I know VERY well she is female. If you read I even made a joke that the name was female because:applecry: named her when she was foal in diapers.

I saw the pic on my search page and thought, "I gotta read this". After doing so, I feel . . . Somewhat violated.






And I like it. -trollestia-

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well just click on the emoticon you want to use. :facehoof:

but i think this is what you are trying for : facehoof :

Unbeknownst to Aloe, the real Lotus Blossom was safely tucked away in a cocoon in the basement of the Spoon Family estate.

That pony is a changeling!

as she discretely levitates a butterfly knife into Lotus's pink mane, under her head band.

That changeling is a spy!

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