Awesome! This chapter had perfectly explained everything that I wanted to know about Octavia's past, good job!

I'm looking forward to those next chapters

Damn these poor ponies are messed up!

1168862 glad to be of service

was that song at the end Rammstein

1169495 oh fiddlesticks! FORGOT TO WRITE A DISCLAIMER!! but, yeah... a good one to

You know, as much as I enjoy the ideas and effort behind your work, you could really do with a strict editor. Your diction and sentence structure is all over the place, and severely detracts from the flow and effectiveness of your work.

There are a lot of dysfunctional fathers in this fic...

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Oh, soul, soul, soul. You write such great work but such terrible character development. Truly you could write a book, publish it and it would sell. But this ever lasting darkness thing holds you back, true people like this do exists and bad things happen but they don't often find each other. Your writing is perfect, amazing, I wish to write like you but your character development is either overdone or underdone. It's either tragic, tragic life story with lots of no brakes for that one person or Random tragic/happy. Sure Overbearing parents with money and reputation do turn out bad kids, sometimes but no always. I'm not arguing with your artistic vision but at one point or another, life isn't that bad.

But yeah can't wait.

1171027 HOW COME I'VE NEVER HEARD OF THIS SONG?!! It's genius! It's fitting! (Sigh), I should have used this one instead

1178944 I thank you for the wonderful comment and would like to tell you my vision of life:

No one is born good or evil. Everything depends on our genes, the environment and our parents. Balance is needed to maintain a good and healthy childhood, something that makes us who we are. However, the human wants to live a good life with as little conflicts as possible. He enjoys the peace for too long, and he won't be prepared to see the bad sides of life. Once it strikes down, he will be chocked and scared.
No one should have to live through a life consisting of violence, drugs, abuse or nightmares. But fact is fact that it's happening, and people who lives outside that horrible world often doesn't see how bad it actually is.
So that's what I want to show everyone. That life CAN be cruel, and that we should never forget that there's always someone we can help...

1180159 accident right

1229074 It's on the way

1229173 When is the next chapter due to come out? as edgy as this one is (for my tastes anyways) I am interested to see how you work this. Overall, I applaud how you are doing this. Bravo

1273189 I'm working on it, and I hope it will come out this week end. Don't worry

Very interesting chapter. I'm liking the flashbacks that tell why each character is the way that they are. Octy and Bon Bon, both being raped. Lyra and Vinyl, both having terrible families in one way or another. Damn. Love the story.