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I like where this is going!
Sweeet! Soulhook you are the Bach of clop.
Well hello soul, once again out to burn my eyes? Well no, okay. So anyway, it was gooooood? But you didn't really explain why octavia is Russian? and there were one or two editing mistakes that, you as a pro should of got, in my opinion. So let me guess octavia tries to rape bon-bon and then some sort of affair happens and then some random shit then ending possibly with the death of one of the main characters.? It's alright in way of telling but the context was just a bit strange but what else don I expect from you. So tracking to see if I'm right. Also side note, in a fan fiction I'm writing can I use your name as a passing reference? So keep up the good work and out the dildos.
328150 That was an impressive try you did there to foresee the story of events
And about Octavia being Russian, let's just say that there will be more chapters in order to explain everything. Leaving plot holes unsolved is not my thing (heh... I'm such a perv 
)
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I know, I face hoof every time you write. But it's a good type of hurt. And did you really just make that joke? So yeah keep it up and tell me about that whole name thing because I need a bunch of names and general descriptions of the sort of stories these people like you write. By the way it's not in a bad way but more of a historical way as saying you broke the stereotype of something.
I can imagine how this ends up...
"I enjoy getting the shit beaten out of me"
"Really? I love beating the shit out of mares!"
"Let's cheat on our lovers!"
"Okay!"
Okay, I really like where this is going.
We met again soul and may I just say damn you for writing a better masturbation scene with vinyl, you great bastard
But any way great writing as always but I am seeing a few editing errors like "her" instead "here" but I digress. And as always the plot is there to shock and shock you did but still it was well done, well placed and overall good. And I won't go on about dildos and fillyfoolers although it burns me
. So keep up the good writing and I do believe I know the plot now and it pretty well goes the way I thought it would but please go on
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I did not see this coming.
380656 sarcasm... or?
374582 Okay, I'll be honest and say that it's hard to come up with anything you can masturbate properly with in the shower except a dildo if not your bare hands/hooves, and besides... there are people with dildo fetishes too
I'm not trying to offend anyone with this but it's also impossible to fulfill everyone's pleasure. If I could.... hot darn, that would be one long chapter 
I don't know how but I can tell what's gonna happen... LOL btw I used to read all your stuff on fanfiction.net but I don't have access to that anymore
"her toy went a little to far down." *should be 'too'.
Grammar Nazi is at it again! and lol.
my boner went on vacation when i finished reading this
Damn this is good!
Never stop writing my friend!
Well I was almost right, but it was good and man I love mad bon-bon. Though with octavia, at the start I think there could of been some anger at the dildo, like throwing it but thats just me. So good on you soul, it's good to see you back on form.
456396 NEVER! NEVER EVER! FOREVER? YES, FOREVER NEVER! I guess what I'm trying to say is that I will continue...
456813 well, we all have our ways of reacting. I can spoil that Octavia felt a little disappointed at herself for making Vinyl use a dildo instead of her...
456290 for the love of Luna, don't forget to comment and say what you thought!
i read up to this 'Octavia asked and stroke the inanimate object again with a fore hoof' and my thoughts went straight to Dr. Evil petting his damn cat
463760 Wow, nice comment! All long and big and... heh....
Well, about the Vinyl/Lyra part, I can just say that this story is far from over....that's all. Sorry, but I just can't spoil anything 
Also, the dildo was a major mind breaker for Octavia, but I guess I forgot to explain that in this chapter. Perhaps I'll do it in the others instead! And thx again!
459180 haaaahh.... I love Dr. Evil
I am enjoying this fic so much.
Though something in this chapter threw me for a loop.
Four Mares planning, recruiting for, organizing and executing a brutal rape with lots of physical evidence in the time frame of about 20 minutes with no concern to the consequences of their actions. I mean do the five ponies who did this not have families or just don't have plans for the next five to ten years. Not to mention personal slights aside 4 random ponies just being perfectly fine with rape, kidnapping and assault...
I can barely get four people to agree on a restaurant let alone multiple felonies.
I gotta say I love you're characterization of Octavia.
468174 Your thinking is absolutely rational and contains perfect logic.... exactly what those four mares forgot during their blind rage. When you act during rage, the outcome never ends in a good way, and what you can tell from those mares who actually decided to take out revenge in way like this, is that they are no good persons and definitely not good friends. You could say they unknowingly had buried their own graves already when they decided to do this.
The thing with my stories are that I always add the bitter PARTS of reality and adds them into these fictional creations. I point out all the fragile sides we carry and shows how horrible humans can be.... with ponies.
Ahhhh, ein gehrman ahczent?
473976 ehhh, no.... russian
soulhook i have read 3 of your storys and i got to say i NEED MORE PLz! you have got real skill keep up the good work
559174 it would change my writing style a lot if I separated the dialogues like that. I'm glad with the current style, but perhaps I might just test the one you mentioned. I used to write like that when I just started with it, but who knows
561582 well, falling to an imminent death thanks to a banana skid is just as hilarious as it sounds. You know what they say: it's funny until someone get hurt, then it's hilarious. And if they die, you choke to death from laughter.
And let's not forget that sadistic happiness is true happiness
Well once again you have gone almost to far:face hoof:. Yeah I don't know what to say so I'm just going to wipe this from my memory cause, dude its fucked up.
572002 it's the bitter reality that actually happens in real life. Ponies have been taken so far on the internet community that it was just a question of time before people would add reality in the creations of art they make. I just decided to take the area that effects poeple in a horrible way, that's why it fascinates me.
572565 True but you have more than, 4 in this story and if that happened to one single person, in one lifetime, I would consider it very unlikely. But hey it does happen and it does effect people.
This story definitely leaves me feeling a little dirty...but i have to say I am genuinely eager to see how things turn out. And this has been the only chapter so far I just count get any arousal from.
I really want to know what was up with Lyra during this chapter. I mean even with the back story what did she think happened to Bob-Bon. And what about her past made her so afraid Bon-Bon was going to leave her. Until the back story hit I thought she had just heard Bon-Bon like moaning Octavia in her sleep or something.
703664 those questions will be answered in time. However, Lyra's condition is pretty much already described. When she found Bon Bon unconscious, she was fully convinced something BAD had happened, something that would ruin her image of a life filled with harmony. She had a breakdown as a foal when she realized her mother was getting abused and when she had to see her mother getting raped. She just wanted everything to return to normal by eliminating what disturbed her perfect world. That's why she asked her dad to disappear (which he accidentally did)
TL;DR she absolutely can't handle the truth that sometimes horrible things happen in life.
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That makes sense. I have trouble interpreting the actions of characters at times.
YES! The update has come at last!
Nothing like starting the morning with an update on this great story!
I feel like Lyra is the most interesting character. So innocent, yet...so damaged. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_cry.png
Oh dear athena, "And Lyra a tasty bowl of strawberry cream and milk..." made me laugh so hard. Thanx Soul good to see you back. Hope to see more of your work and ponies.
Have emotion cons for your effort.
1078477 gracias ^^
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May I inquire about what drug(s) Vinyl's parents were addicted to?
1097544 that was not really important, giving their already obviously damaged behavior and constant usage to lying. But when Vinyl busts her father in the living room, it says she was pointing at a half-burned joint in an ashtray. And PLEASE don't start any arguing about marijuana (or anything else similar) not being a drug. Fact is fact that you can get addicted to it. And all sorts of addictions have one mutual thing: it makes you want more...
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I wasn't really going to argue about it, I just find that knowing what they are doing in more detail makes it easier for me to understand a certain character's perspective.
Awesome! This chapter had perfectly explained everything that I wanted to know about Octavia's past, good job!
I'm looking forward to those next chapters
Damn these poor ponies are messed up!
1168862 glad to be of service
was that song at the end Rammstein
1169495 oh fiddlesticks! FORGOT TO WRITE A DISCLAIMER!! but, yeah... a good one to
You know, as much as I enjoy the ideas and effort behind your work, you could really do with a strict editor. Your diction and sentence structure is all over the place, and severely detracts from the flow and effectiveness of your work.
There are a lot of dysfunctional fathers in this fic...
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Oh, soul, soul, soul. You write such great work but such terrible character development. Truly you could write a book, publish it and it would sell. But this ever lasting darkness thing holds you back, true people like this do exists and bad things happen but they don't often find each other. Your writing is perfect, amazing, I wish to write like you but your character development is either overdone or underdone. It's either tragic, tragic life story with lots of no brakes for that one person or Random tragic/happy. Sure Overbearing parents with money and reputation do turn out bad kids, sometimes but no always. I'm not arguing with your artistic vision but at one point or another, life isn't that bad.
But yeah can't wait.
1171027 HOW COME I'VE NEVER HEARD OF THIS SONG?!! It's genius! It's fitting! (Sigh), I should have used this one instead
1178944 I thank you for the wonderful comment and would like to tell you my vision of life:
No one is born good or evil. Everything depends on our genes, the environment and our parents. Balance is needed to maintain a good and healthy childhood, something that makes us who we are. However, the human wants to live a good life with as little conflicts as possible. He enjoys the peace for too long, and he won't be prepared to see the bad sides of life. Once it strikes down, he will be chocked and scared.
No one should have to live through a life consisting of violence, drugs, abuse or nightmares. But fact is fact that it's happening, and people who lives outside that horrible world often doesn't see how bad it actually is.
So that's what I want to show everyone. That life CAN be cruel, and that we should never forget that there's always someone we can help...
1180159 accident right
1229074 It's on the way