We met again soul and may I just say damn you for writing a better masturbation scene with vinyl, you great bastard But any way great writing as always but I am seeing a few editing errors like "her" instead "here" but I digress. And as always the plot is there to shock and shock you did but still it was well done, well placed and overall good. And I won't go on about dildos and fillyfoolers although it burns me . So keep up the good writing and I do believe I know the plot now and it pretty well goes the way I thought it would but please go on374579
374582 Okay, I'll be honest and say that it's hard to come up with anything you can masturbate properly with in the shower except a dildo if not your bare hands/hooves, and besides... there are people with dildo fetishes too I'm not trying to offend anyone with this but it's also impossible to fulfill everyone's pleasure. If I could.... hot darn, that would be one long chapter
"I close your eyes .... We are alone. I hold it, and no one sees them cry. She closes her eyes ... she does not resist .... love is for everyone ... not for me" Those were the song lyrics. Huh, that was quite the chapter. That was very intense and, kind of a "meh" when it came to sexy material. Still sexy, but it could have been sexier. I fear the next chapter, but I shall trudge on anyway.
Okay, I really like where this is going.
We met again soul and may I just say damn you for writing a better masturbation scene with vinyl, you great bastard But any way great writing as always but I am seeing a few editing errors like "her" instead "here" but I digress. And as always the plot is there to shock and shock you did but still it was well done, well placed and overall good. And I won't go on about dildos and fillyfoolers although it burns me . So keep up the good writing and I do believe I know the plot now and it pretty well goes the way I thought it would but please go on374579
I did not see this coming.
380656 sarcasm... or?
374582 Okay, I'll be honest and say that it's hard to come up with anything you can masturbate properly with in the shower except a dildo if not your bare hands/hooves, and besides... there are people with dildo fetishes too I'm not trying to offend anyone with this but it's also impossible to fulfill everyone's pleasure. If I could.... hot darn, that would be one long chapter
I don't know how but I can tell what's gonna happen... LOL btw I used to read all your stuff on fanfiction.net but I don't have access to that anymore
"her toy went a little to far down." *should be 'too'. Grammar Nazi is at it again! and lol.
my boner went on vacation when i finished reading this
"I close your eyes .... We are alone. I hold it, and no one sees them cry. She closes her eyes ... she does not resist .... love is for everyone ... not for me" Those were the song lyrics. Huh, that was quite the chapter. That was very intense and, kind of a "meh" when it came to sexy material. Still sexy, but it could have been sexier. I fear the next chapter, but I shall trudge on anyway.